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云亦然G · 发表于 2014-10-19 19:40

搞定一篇，，静等吐槽，，，

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章震宇cafa · 发表于 2014-10-19 19:41

作文随手写，老师来评分（英语一），感谢老师指教。

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云亦然G · 发表于 2014-10-19 19:44

作文随手写，老师来点评
英语一

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章震宇cafa · 发表于 2014-10-19 19:45

作文随手写，老师来评分（英语一），上张不清楚，再传一张，麻烦老师了。

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向日葵yi · 发表于 2014-10-19 19:54

我的作文没法提交，怎么办、

向日葵yi · 发表于 2014-10-19 20:21

作文随手写，老师来评分（英语一）

云亦然G · 发表于 2014-10-19 20:23

【作文随手写，老师来评分】英语一
There are two pictures above.The left one reveals a beautiful girl who is throwing a banana skin while eating a banana.And a garbage can behind her.The right pictures shows a disability man with a walking stick picked it up to the can.The caption under the pictures illustrates that beautiful is not just on the face.
From the pictures,we may come to understand that the painter is trying to convey a deep concern about the lack of moral cultivation.besides,painter also wants to warn us that the phenomenon may be commomplace in our society.People just want to make life easier to themselves but do a damage to society.Owing to we didn’t have a high standard of moral.
Measures should be taken to enhance nations’ moral cultivation.First,the public should cultivate a good manner in public place.Second,society should disseminate more positive examples.We are agreement beautiful is not beauty,beauty of mind is beautiful.Everyone has a beautiful mind,we can really build a healthy and beautiful society.

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laaaancy · 发表于 2014-10-19 20:42

不知道可以不

南瓜爱 · 发表于 2014-10-19 20:52

作文词汇句型还没背呢

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luningjiayou · 发表于 2014-10-19 21:05

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