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昭夜 · 发表于 2014-10-19 19:02

龙呼晴发表于 2014-10-18 15:22
为么我发作文帖子说我包含不良信息，我是大大的良民呢

我也是。。。图片发不了，内容包含不良信息。。。简直没救了

昭夜 · 发表于 2014-10-19 19:04

龙呼晴发表于 2014-10-18 15:33
天，是disabled 噗，重伤

我去。。不良信息是什么意思，，我总是发布上去。。

我不知会遇见lee · 发表于 2014-10-19 19:06

作文随手写，老师来评分英语一
   The two cartoons feature a shark constract between two  people's perspectives on litters .In the first picture,a charming girl who wears a beautiful dress and a pair of cool sunglasses,throwing the banana skin anywhere rather than the garbage can in spite of it is extremely close to her.Conversely,in the second picture,a disabled man who only has one leg picking up the banana skin thrown by the beautiful girl into the garbage can.What a ironically thing.As the caption says,beauty is not on the surface.
   The deeply revealing cartoons are aimed at exposing the rampant growth of decline in moral values in recent China.That is to say,more and more Chinese pay attention to their appearance rather than the inner beauty.In fact,inner beauty plays an significant role when evaluated by others in your lifetime.Outer beauty is temporary while inner beauty is eternal.
      Each of us is supposed to draw attention to the inner beauty instead of the appearance.Ineer beauty including environmental consciousness,accommodating,respect the old and cherish the yong and other chinese traditional moral values.From my perspective,school should add some moral classes to improve students' self-cultivation.As another key player in the issue,government should provide encouragement and rewarding for the sake of cultivating the inner beauty.

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