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haru11

haru11 发表于 2014-10-19 17:13
谢谢！请评论。*^_^*

刚才那两张不太清楚，这是重新拍的，谢谢！

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秋日阳光91

说我发的内容有不良信息 发不了啊 就一篇英语作文 哪来的不良信息啊  图片也传不了

行走的猪油膏

写的英语一，麻烦老师批改～谢谢啦！

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向日葵yi

我写的作文怎么没法提交呢？页面显示有不良信息？好奇怪啊！怎么办呢/

行走的猪油膏

行走的猪油膏 发表于 2014-10-19 17:50
写的英语一，麻烦老师批改～谢谢啦！

图片没转过来，重新发。。麻烦老师啦～

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向日葵yi

秋日阳光91 发表于 2014-10-19 17:50
说我发的内容有不良信息 发不了啊 就一篇英语作文 哪来的不良信息啊  图片也传不了
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我的也是这种情况啊，额·····

我不知会遇见lee

作文随手写，老师来评分      学渣求老师狠狠拍

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haru11

发的图片太不清楚了，打在这里吧，谢谢老师！
wearing sunglasses and gorgeous dress,a yong beautiful girl throws the peel tothe ground after eating up the banana,by contrast, an physical-challenged man dressed casually picks up the litter and makes the street return clean.And there is a topic below the cartoon which says the true beauty is not about appearance.
As a matter of fact,there are so many people inour country dressed in brand clothes and wearing jewelry tomake them looked pretty,forgetting to do the same thing for environment.considering this issue,I can think of no better examplication than the following one.One day I was studying in the classroom when a girl came in and sit in front of me.She wiped the desk with a tissue again and again and then threw it to the floor.I always make my things tiny so it made me feel a little sick.We are people in society,which means we should take others' feeling into account. apparently,there are someone have not done that.Including throwing litter to the street,walking on the grass and so on,they have done many harmful things to our surrounding.
As the person with social morality,we should spare noeffort to make our surroundings stay clean and beautiful.For instance,if we see somebody throwing litter next time,we should remind them not doing the same thing again.Besides,perfect the penalty method of behavior about ruining environment can help a lot to solve the problem.

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小小旖旎

小黄瓜2014 发表于 2014-10-17 17:15
从小学开始，就讨厌写作文，后来才知道英语作文才是真的痛啊

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