自己整理的作文模板 基础基本没有 目标大众分

kien55cn

RT。因为我自己英语写作的基础非常差，所以我决定依靠模板。目标就是一般分数就可以，然后模板做到尽量的万能化、傻瓜化。自己花了差不多一个多月的时间整理出来的，参考了**星火还有黄皮书上边的模板。我相信和我一样目标的童鞋应该不少，所以放上来供大家参考一下。
因为我写作水平很差。这个模板漏洞肯定很多，仅供参考。如果有哪位大虾能帮忙修改一下，尽量减少模板的痕迹，还有语法错误等等。小弟不甚感激～

kien55cn

括号里边的是备选句子。
一社会现象类
负面
1,As is vividly illustrated in the picture that,__.2The most striking feather that impresses me deeply is that__.3The words below the cartoon say __.(4there is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.)
5The thought-provoking drawing mirrors a common phenomenon in today's society-__.6According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily, the past _years has witnessed a sharp increase in the percentage of __from _to _.7If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of __.
8Hence,it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to reveres this disturbing trend,9To begin with, we should cultivate the awareness of people that__ are of great significance to us.9what's more, stricter laws should be implemented to__.10only in this way can we curb the current phenomenon revealed in the picture.
争议型（本身无可非议但过度就不好了）
1As is vividly illustrated in the picture that,__（which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts)2The most striking feather that impresses me deeply is that__.3The words below the cartoon say __.(4there is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.)
5The thought-provoking drawing mirrors a common phenomenon in today's society-__. 6Everybody loves __.Yet pleasure can vanish if you learn that--7IF you were to examined those people who__, you would find this phenomenon to be even more pronounced.8According to a recent survey conducted by__, the past _years has witnessed a sharp increase in the percentage of __from _to _.9And this might bring an unpleasant or even damaging outcome.
10In my opinion, though __ itself gives little cause for criticism,__ should __in proper way.It is not worthwhile __.(__is a natural part of everyday life and there is no way to avoid it. what we can do is to develop our adaptive abilities to deal with it rather than to escape from it.)12To have a good result, we each individual should start form here and now, and attach great value and importance to the urgency of the issue.13only in this way can we curb the current phenomenon revealed in the picture.
积极型
1As is vividly illustrated in the picture that,__.2The most striking feather that impresses me deeply is that__.3The words below the cartoon say __.(4there is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.)
5As is symbolically in the set of drawings, the fact that__ profoundly indicates that __ is momentous and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds.6As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than__ to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency. secondly, no issue is as good as __to make our life more colorful and energetic.7According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily, a high proportion of 98.5 percentage of – consider – as the most important factor in doing--.
8From what have been discussed above, it admits of no doubt that in doing things whatever great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better__.9However,it is easier said than done, practice is the most important factor.10There are good reasons to expect that the __has become an irreversible trend.
二、人生哲理型
1As is vividly illustrated in the picture that,__.2The most striking feather that impresses me deeply is that__.3The words below the cartoon say __.
5As is symbolically in the set of drawings, the fact that__ profoundly indicates that __ is momentous and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds.8According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily, the past _years has witnessed a sharp increase in the percentage of __from _to _.
9Examples to prove the view are abundant, the most persuasive are the cases of__.10例子11.In sum ,__should be the right attitude towards life and work for everybody and even for a country.(In sum, it is essential for our young people to derive positive implications from the above thought provoking drawings)

zzdqzhxl

I have seen these several times

kien55cn

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恩 这个是我从几本书里边拼起来的

liujinjin1988

kien55cn 发表于 2010-12-12 09:59
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恩 这个是我从几本书里边拼起来的

那个，把开头恶俗的句子改几个吧，看黄皮书上的评分标准，直接归为抵挡作文。

kien55cn

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恩。。我也觉得有点俗。但是我一时也找不到更好的替代句子。。。。

SparKy!

看黄皮书上的评分标准，直接归为抵挡作文。

具体在哪呢？求教

liujinjin1988

SparKy! 发表于 2010-12-12 11:55
看黄皮书上的评分标准，直接归为抵挡作文。

具体在哪呢？求教

zhangjian 历年真题卷子后面有高中低三档例文评分。

yjlsdfz

liujinjin1988 发表于 2010-12-12 13:33
zhangjian 历年真题卷子后面有高中低三档例文评分。

你仔细看看那些分档的主要参考标准，底下有标注，并不是因为开头用了这些“模板句”才归为低档
主要是有大量语法或单词拼写错误，逻辑混乱，句子之间衔接差以及有些字数严重不够才会造成“中低档”
这是关键因素

liujinjin1988

yjlsdfz 发表于 2010-12-12 14:27
你仔细看看那些分档的主要参考标准，底下有标注，并不是因为开头用了这些“模板句”才归为低档
主要是有 ...

这个我知道，我也看了，只不过你再细心看看，中低档作**很少有模板的痕迹，也不得不说张老师的作文书也比较难写，丝毫没有模板的痕迹，但是，这个vividly的模板已经用了多少年了。什么此图带给我们的震惊的含义深刻的之类，至少我接触到的参与判卷老师都非常讨厌这种句子。