世纪高教《写作高分突破热点话题100篇》作文修改专贴

ichliebezc

张老师您好！我只买了黄宝真题，可以将写的真题作文贴在这个楼里吗？然后我再将序列号发到您邮箱

guotaylor

Dear sir or madam,
   I’m writing to ask if you can recommend a foreigner as the recipent of my promotion in Mandarin.
   I would be grateful if the foreigner is a girl.My teaching plan will be as follows.First,I would teach her some grammar which could know some cultures of our country.Then, I will show her some vocabularies to make her Mandarin.In addition,I would have a try to talk to her in Mandarin.
   I hope you can support my promotion.If you have a proper candidate,please contact me.It will be better if you can send her photo to me.
   I appreciate the time that you have taken to read my letter.I’m looking forward to hearing your reply.
                                                        Yours  sincerely
Li Ming.

ichliebezc

已短消息您序列号、卡号、密码
  As is shown in the picture, in 1900, the sea abounded with fishes and only one boat was fishing. On the contrary, in 1995, there were so many fishing-boats but only one fish.
   It goes without saying that the drawing aims at revealing a common problem: overfishing. Millions of sharks die for shark fin soup every year. Not only the fish, but also the land animals are being killed. Hundreds of species become extinct every year because of their delicious meat, rare fur and other useful parts on their bodies. The essence of these wrong action is to gain short-term and partial interest at the expense of damaging the natural balance. We must keep highly alert of the problem, because once whe natural balance damages to a certain degree, it will surely threaten human beings.
  Due to the depth and width of its harmful influnce, we must aquire power from technology, management, law and culture. At first, the correlated laws should be established to forbid this irrational action. The school and the mass media should develop guide and cultivate noble and worthy values and qualities among people. In a conclusion, all the society should make actively more sustained and concerted efforts.

windwindhe

原帖由 peterzjf 于 2010-11-12 09:16 发表





引出图片描写的句子和体现文章框架结构的句子，以及论述社会问题的段落都适合背诵。背诵后要注意灵活运用。

请问您觉得有必要进行全文背诵吗？

guotaylor

想尝试不用黄皮书的作文模板，但还是以它的作文题目写。。应该可以改吧？