世纪高教《写作高分突破热点话题100篇》作文修改专贴

凌宵舞

Dear Mr.Smith,
     I am writing this letter for introducing my friend judie,who want to take an investigation of student's attitude towards English learning in your school.
     The survey would be conducted from Nov.1st to 6th,in which period Judie will collect information from about 500 students.She promises that investigation wil be taken among class times in order to aviod the disruption of teaching.If you have any problem,please contact Judie at telephone number 12345678.I deem she would give you a content answer.
      I hope everything will goes well about the action.My appreciation to you for your geneous help is beyond words
                                                                                                                  Your Sincenely
                                                                                                                  Li Ming

凌宵舞

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      It has been said that the most important trait of modern children is independence.As is symbolically depicted in the given picture,a tree is standing hinge on a stick in the first stage.Ironically,as the tree grows,it remain depends on the stick.Eventually,it is falling down when the stick was removed.It seems to me that the painter is sending a message about the imperative of the spirit of independence.
      Why does the idea of independence is loom so large in the modern world?Surely for the sake of independence of a particular kind is taking place around us and is becoming more and more manifest.Without it,everything could be in a state of chaos.Numerous examples can demonstrate the power of rely on oneself solely.In the fierce competition,it is not unusal for us to find a man,who grows under the dotting care, when he is faced with annoying stress,failure is undoubted.The best way to overcome it,so at least it seems to me,is to cultivate your independence as early as possible.I deem that a guy who throught toil is dare to faced with any mountainous challenge.
      In summary.we need  the spirit of independence to solve a variety of problem in life.Nothing is impossible for a strong-minded boy.

另外再问个问题  guy boy 这些单词表示人这个意思时是不是个非常口语化？ 在作文中是否不要出现为妙？

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额。。。发邮箱了，怎么好像没回应了