世纪高教《写作高分突破热点话题100篇》作文修改专贴

凌宵舞

这……大作文这么低的分，被张老师您批的都没信心了:-(

windwindhe

请问《考研英语写作高分突破》哪些部分或范文适合背诵呢？

windwindhe

指背到滚瓜烂熟那种

txzlbqy

As is symbolically illustrated in the portrayal, a boy is surfing on the internet, talking with his friends from the web, however, he refute communicate when he mother hope to have a talk with him. His poor mother can’t understand why his son prefers to speak to a computer rather than spent some time talking with her.
        The metaphorical and impressive cartoon has subtly revealed the phenomenon that many people addicted to internet to maintain face-to-face contact to their family members. On the one hand, once indulged in the fictitious world, people feel reluctant to approach others and to concentrate to real life. That’s why some people have lost the skill of direct contact and get alienated from others. On the other hand, owing to the improving of technology, a large number of young people regard cyberspace as part of their life and they feel their parents who don’t like computer can’t understand them.
          In my view, no doubt internet is useful in the modern world, but it’s necessary for us to use internet in a reasonable way. After all, internet is invented to communicate you and me, to bring convenience to our daily life rather than set a barrier to keep family members beyond reach.

[ 本帖最后由 txzlbqy 于 2010-11-11 19:36 编辑 ]