世纪高教《写作高分突破热点话题100篇》作文修改专贴

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谢谢老师修改了  这里还有两个小作文~~麻烦您抽空批改  序列号密码已发过       

倡议信——号召大家献血
        Dear schoolmates,
          A severe shortage of blood is afflicting China’s hospitals and numerous blood banks have reported dangerously low supplies. However, I do find, in the meantime, there are some areas where improvement may be possible and the most important one is our take part in.
        From my point of view, it is wise to denote our blood to the hospital and blood banks because many people needed blood to save their life and family 400CC blood is a little of our body , but it maybe a man’s all wishes.
        Thank you for taking time reading this letter and I hope all of us can actively and voluntarily participate in blood donation.
                                                            Yours sincerely,
                                                                Li Ming
       
        介绍信——介绍志愿者去打工子弟学校
        Dear Sir or Madam,
        Please allow me to introduce the students who came from the Peking University. They are the members of our organization established for the kids born in poor family.
        We have found them a most capable and responsible volunteers and our relationship with them have been entirely cordial. They were not only good at teaching but also have many live skill. So the kids will learn a lot. They will spend two months in your school and live together with the children.
   I would greatly appreciate your receiving them as your school’s teacher.
                                                            Yours faithfully,
                                                                Li Ming

christina0220

真的是很人性化的老师和专题帖呀，请问老师，我买了2012年得高分突破，还能不能在这里请老师指导？

stellvie

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tssj

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热点作文50篇  安逸与本职
                                                                                                                                                                                                         It is a duty for a cat to catch mice.But in this picture, the action of this cat really suprizes me . A mouse is scared of meeting the cat.But the cat turns a blind eye to the mouse, closing its eyes, and it says "I don't need to catch mouse for I have a plenty of fish to eat ".
     This drawing implicts a social phenomenon that  some people forget their own duties becomes of comfortable life. In recent years, with the development of economy ,people have a better life than before. However, getting accustomed to living a comfortable life, some people gradually forget their duties and don't want to take responsibilities anymore. For instance, some children grow up under their parent's careful protection, they live in a comfortable life and happy life. So it is just becomes that, they think it is natural for them to enjoy their life and ask for money from their parents. But they don't want to take their responsibilities to support their parents.
     It is right to purse a comfortable life,but it is aslo our duty to take our responsibilities. Giving and Receiving is equal. We should know that only we work hard and take our responsibilities, can we realize our true value.        

patrick91

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密码：39229817     o7大作文  先谢谢老师们了！
How metaphorical and impressive the portrayal above is! As is subtly shown in the cartoon, two teenagers are playing football at the playground, to be specific, one boy is preparing to shoot and the other is engaged in a nervous condition wondering if he could defend successfully. Unfortunately, it is rather ironic that, at the same time, the two lads are both indulged in the feeling that their rival is so strong that they are hopeless in winning the match.
There is no denying that the cartoonist aims at reminding us of the importance of self-confidence in this competitive society. Hardly can anyone achieve success in his career without the spirit of being sure of himself. As the competition in all lines of work grows increasingly fierce, we must defeat our opponents through powerful confidence. We will be confined to frail minds if we always intend to rely on other people for fear that we can not accomplish the mission smoothly.
Examples in mounting numbers could justify what has been argued above. Take Liu Xiang for instance, it is his powerful confidence that empowers him to enjoy the honor of national hero. Also, I assume that if there were more people believing in themselves, there would be more outstanding individuals in the world.

神娃

直接发这里就可以吗？