世纪高教《写作高分突破热点话题100篇》作文修改专贴

sisiyu001

哎，等了快一周了，早知道发邮件了

爱养狼狗

最后5套题，模拟三的大作文。帮忙看看有没有语法错误，呵呵，谢谢
  Simple as they are,what the two pictures convey to us is thought-provoking! As is subtly presented in the interesting and instructive cartoons above,a man read a newspaper to kill his time in 1990,while by 2010,he has turned to th Interent to pass the time.
    Humorous and ridiculous as the image is,the drawing does mirror a phenomenon of a tremendous change during the twenty years ，and is apparently far-reaching.Initially,such a phenomenon as revealed in the picture is not uncommon in china .Nowhere in history has the issue  been talked about so much as in our society today.What's more, this change not only  does harm to newpapers ,but also results in newpapers are becoming the hardcore Intetent users,Additionally,the painter intends to convince us that a package programs should be initiated to reverse the grim situation.
   On the whole,it is high time that much importance were attached to such cases.It is therefore,I think,necessary that immediate actions be taken to curb such practices .As long as we pay more attention to it,make concerted effert to strive hard,such upsetting stories will ultimately be ended or at least ease off.