我自己魔改背的范文分数会比范文原本的句型分数低吗。

京京京z · 发表于 2019-12-2 12:36

在背王江涛大作文，感觉很多句子有点绕口，我基础差我背了十篇大十篇小每篇都用书上复杂的原句型的话容易混乱，我就自己改了下明显简单了许多这么改的话分数会低很多吗？比如这句原先是to sum up it is my view that number of opportunities each of us has depends on combination of factors
我给改成all in all I think how many of opportunities each of us had depends on a variety of factors这种小改
或者这种 I\'d like to thank you for the interest you are taking in us students 直接改成thank you very much for your attention to us students这种看着就很小学生句子分数会不会低很多啊我基础不好背王江涛原句真的很艰难自己改一下还好点

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