考研写作：“网购”热点话题你来写，我来评！

龙呼晴

liudabaobei 发表于 2014-11-11 15:14
其他贴子有这种情况吗？

不知道66楼占不占得到

爱琴的考研

抢

龙呼晴

取难太字名 发表于 2014-11-11 15:17
看不清，最好自己再加个电子的

你也太贴心了吧，哈哈

孫景亮

刘刘LIU 发表于 2014-11-11 14:20
亲，考研党过个节而已

哟西。

龙呼晴

龙呼晴

龙呼晴 发表于 2014-11-11 15:18

吆西，占楼成功，不知道这样算不算犯规啊。附上个电子版吧。
A person is thrillingly pushing a trolley into a screen of a computer,as the cartoon above vividly depicts,which is so enormous that the person who seems comparably small can walk freely on it.We are informed that everything will be available as long as the internet is in handy.
    The purpose of the picture is to show us something far beyond a temporary fashion trend.Instead,it implies a new way of life in the ever-changing 21 century.I can think no better illustration than the following one.Just like my grandma,who is seventy years old and has never touched computer before,asked me to buy a new down jacket online for her on November,11.Let's take another example,one collegue of my mother purchased all kinds of appliance such as air condiction,fridge,television and so on online instead of buying them in a actual department store.It is apparent that  department store.It is apparent that shopping online has been a nationwide hit ranging from the young to the old,from the city to the countryside.
    Personally,I am fond of shopping online in that it is cheaper and  more convenient. However,there is no denying that various of inferior and false merchandise online completely make people annoyed.Therefore,people shopping online  should learn to tell what is true and fake. Meanwhile,regulators should also enhance the management of transaction online.Only in this way can we have a more secure and harmonious environment online.

龙呼晴

龙呼晴 发表于 2014-11-11 15:18

好吧，奇了怪了，本想附个电子版，居然不行，方老师受累看手写版吧，我尽力写得好看了

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龙呼晴 发表于 2014-11-11 14:45
不要啊，都占44楼了，怎么还木有？

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龙呼晴

考研论坛 发表于 2014-11-11 15:27
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