考研写作：“网购”热点话题你来写，我来评！

龙呼晴

难道只有44楼才能发作文？

龙呼晴

算我无聊试一下，原谅我吧

龙呼晴

42

龙呼晴

A person is thrillingly pushing a trolley into a screen of a computer,as the cartoon above vividly depicts,which is so enormous that the person who sees comparably small can walk freely on it.We are informed that everything will be available as long as the internet is in handy.
    The purpose of the picture is to show us something far beyond a temporary fashion trend.Instead,it implies a new way of life in the ever-changing 21 century.I can think no better illustration than the following one.Just like my grandma,who is seventy years old and has never touched computer before,asked me to buy a new down jacket online for her on November,11.Let's take another example,one collegue of my mother purchased all kinds of appliance such as air condiction,fridge,television and so on online instead of buying them in a actual department store.It is apparent  that shopping online has been a nationwide hit ranging from the young to the old,from the city to the countryside.
    Personally,I am fond of shopping online in that it is cheaper and  more convenient. However,there is no denying that various of inferior and false merchandise online completely make people annoyed.Therefore,people shopping online  should learn to tell what is true and fake. Meanwhile,regulators should also enhance the management of transaction online.Only in this way can we have a more secure and harmonious environment online.

龙呼晴

不要啊，都占44楼了，怎么还木有？

tingtingwu

aliyxiang 发表于 2014-11-11 13:44
enormous,tremendous

不是站在电脑上。是往它里走类

龙呼晴

A person is thrillingly pushing a trolley into a screen of a computer,as the cartoon above vividly depicts,which is so enormous that the person who sees comparably small can walk freely on it.We are informed that everything will be available as long as the internet is in handy.
    The purpose of the picture is to show us something far beyond a temporary fashion trend.Instead,it implies a new way of life in the ever-changing 21 century.I can think no better illustration than the following one.Just like my grandma,who is seventy years old and has never touched computer before,asked me to buy a new down jacket online for her on November,11.Let's take another example,one collegue of my mother purchased all kinds of appliance such as air condiction,fridge,television and so on online instead of buying them in a actual department store.It is apparent that shopping online has been a nationwide hit ranging from the young to the old,from the city to the countryside.
    Personally,I am fond of shopping online in that it is cheaper and  more convenient. However,there is no denying that various of inferior and false merchandise online completely make people annoyed.Therefore,people shopping online  should learn to tell what is true and fake. Meanwhile,regulators should also enhance the management of transaction online.Only in this way can we have a more secure and harmonious environment online.

龙呼晴

好吧，算是真的发不了了

龙呼晴

龙呼晴 发表于 2014-11-11 14:51
好吧，算是真的发不了了

谁能告诉我消失的楼层是怎么回事？

奋斗1207

50