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这里有篇关于网购和店购的范文
TheWaysWeShop,OnlineandOffline
【1】背景介绍:WiththeadventoftheInternet,onlineshoppinghasbecomemoreandmorepopularthanoffline
shoppingaspeopleturnouttobeaspeciesofdigitalconsumerism.
简述双方观点:Advocatesoftheso-calledbrickandmortarshoppinghavefullyacknowledgeditstraditional
meritsofimmediatefunctionalsatisfaction,privatepurchasetouchandfeelaswellasanindispensablemodeof
leisurespending.Needlesstosay,therearealwaystheopponentswhowouldfocusuponseveralrelativevirtuesof
electroniccommerce:itsconvenienceoftime-savingandexpediency,theeaseandcomfortarisingfromdigital
clicking,lowcostsminusbuildingbrickandmortarshopsandstockingcommodities,andmorepossiblepricecuts
ontheworldwidewebasthisnameproperlyindicates.(按照语料先后次序综述)
推出本文主题句:Withacarefulexamination/analysisofbothwaysweshop,despitetheinevitablebenefitsstreet
roamerscouldenjoyinstantaneouslyandspontaneously,onlineshoppingseemstodeservebetterjustificationfor
eithermaterialandfinancialboonsintermsofcommoditiesorwonderfulpsychologicalexperiencesoffreedom
fromanylimitstraditionalshoppingmustimposeonconsumers.
【2】传统购物的优势(按照语料次序反过来综述,以避免重复):Atfirstsight,awiderrangeofgoodnessfor
traditionalshoppingcanbeseenhitherandthitheralthoughdigitalwaysoflifeareholdingsway.Thedigital
trend,first,cannotobliteratehumanneedforshoppingdowntownforthesakeofdelight,amusementoreven
dating,say,inamagnificentshoppingmall,soastoenhanceanysenseofinterpersonalcommunication.Fora
second,withthefeeloftouchuponthesilk,thecar,orthejewelscustomerscouldfulfillthedesirablepromisesof
possession,muchmorematerialisticallyandpsychologicallyrewardingthanamereclickingontheInternet.Inthe
finalanalysis,whilebrickandmortarboutiquesmaybringtheupperandmiddle-classescomfortablebuying
experiencesbymeetingtheiruniquerequirements,itwasnolessthanamazingtodiscoverthatonecouldbargain
overpriceandperhapsendupwithtwoofsomethingforthepriceofonewhenhetravelsandpurchasesata
bazaarinIstanbul.【借用2009阅读真题TextA,Para.8】(shoes,housesandfruits;seeingisbelieving)
【3】线上购物的优势1【客观上物质上=网络商品的优势】:Bethatasitmay,onsecondthoughts,more
advantagesmaygotosuchapopularfashionofonlinepurchasing.Amongothermerits,
thelargervarietyofgoodsitemsandvirtualstoreswithcomparablepricesandincredibleexpediencyshouldbe
indispensable,say,vastamountsofdesirableinformationversusminutesofbrowsingandselecting.Such
convenience,likeshorthand,servesbesttosavetimeandtroublewhichgenerallycostshopperstime,energy,
patience,orevengoodmood.Digitalwaysofemails,Wechatsandtextualmessagesareabletorenderyoufastest
accesstoanynewpricecutsorhotarrivals.Meanwhile,formerchantsandsellers,theonlineshoppingtrendhas
luredthemtofreethemselvesfromthesupposedlyheavyburdensofstorerentalsandstocks.Itismiraculousto
seethevirtualcirculationstodayofbothfinancialexchangesandcommoditytransfer–anonlineordermaymean
adirecttransportofanitemfromtheproducertothecustomer.
【4】线上购物的优势2【主观上精神上=个人的购物体验心理上】:Moresignificantly,thegreaterconvenience,
flexibilityandexpediencymustalsobringaboutaself-centeredbuyingexperiencethanever.Althoughonedoes
feellikeaqueenshowingupatamalloftheslackseason,customers,moreoftenthannot,mayfeelmorelikea
kingservicedbyallbusinessmenandmerchantsfromallcornersoftheworld.Ahermityetlivingatthecenterof
theuniverse,thecyber-customermanagestoescapethedowntown/high-street/main-streetmaddingcrowdsand
trafficjams.Muchtooursurprise,weturnouttobelonelyislands,separatingoneanotheramidsttheflocksof
purchaserswhilstcybertransactionshavealwaysgratifiedourinnermostimpulsetobeprivilegedwiththesense
ofcomfortandrelaxation.
【5】总结:Toconclude,astheritualsofpurchaseinthelead-uptoChristmaschange,notonlydowegiveless
thoughttothetypeofgiftswebuyforourlovedonesbut,throughourowndigitalwishlists,weincreasingly
controlwhattheybuyforus【本句直接抄自16样卷TextA】.Thereby,ashabitmakesasecondnature,science
andtechnologybasedontheInternetwilldriveithometousthatonlineshoppingmustboastmoreassets/benefits
thanofflineshopping,eitherintermsofuniqueandproudsentimentsinthevirtualspaceorbyprovidingthe
myriadwaysofseeingandconqueringthecyberworldofcommodities.【黑体字借用自Caesar的名言:Icame,
Isaw,Iconquered.】全文尚缺空间去应用too…to,sothat,强调句,enoughto等基础句型。来自Android客户端 |
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