英语二大作文

玮宗VICTOR · 发表于 2016-1-2 16:58

我第二段是这样写的：There are two major reasons to the boom in undergraduates traveling. On the one hand, the growing economy over the period made it possible for students to traveling. students are better off and their growing consuming power permits them to go outside to broaden their horizons. On the other hand, the maturing tourist industry has made traveling increasingly enjoyable. Travel agencies offer not only competitive prices but also satisfactory services, greatly stimulating the tourism market.
Students traveling has a positive effect on both individuals and society. Not only can the people have a better understanding of the culture in other cities, but the economy of tourist resorts also benefits. Moreover, the students are likely to become more open-minded, which is helpful for the progress of their own studies.
大概多少分？北京考区，没有就欣赏风景和缓解压力这两点展开说，回扣很多分吗  

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