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谢谢老师!

伟00128

方会岩 发表于 2014-10-21 16:06
分数：9分
基本完成了试题规定的任务
1.内容包含基本要点；

谢谢老师我会继续努力

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章鱼Andy

方会岩 发表于 2014-10-21 18:08
亲，iphone版考研帮暂时不支持上传图片，或者，用电脑传一下 ...

老师你好，一直在学习，今晚上才看到这个帖子，明天写完后您还能劳心给评一下吗，谢谢，谢谢

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一直走就这样走

我的是自己发的贴诶。。。还木有回复   不会没收到吧。。。

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陌离53

方会岩 发表于 2014-10-21 16:39
字体很小，部分不清楚，可分成两份上传，

麻烦老师了

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荒原。

方会岩 发表于 2014-10-21 16:12
分数:15分
较好地完成了试题规定的任务
1.内容比较丰富；

谢谢老师！我会加油哒！

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冰零0918

老师的回复哪里看啊？

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冰零0918

我的在144楼，谢谢老师！

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陌离53

可能还是不清楚，我还是打吧  英语一作文
  Moral consciousness does exert such a profound effect on our life that it revolutionizes the way of people's living and thinking.As is subtly revealed in the first portrayal,the very girl who is good-looking casts banana peels on the ground even the dustbin beside her.On the contrary,another man picks up the rubbish in another picture.And below the cartoon,there is a topic which says:Beauty is not external.
  The thought-provoking drawings mirror a phenoenon in comtemporary society and tell us that we should put emphasis on our internal virtues rather than our appearances.According to recent statistic conducted by CCTV,the past decade has witnessed a sharp increasing in the percentage of people who will not throw garbage as casually and will gather the trash when they find it ner the midden from 21%to78%.That is to say,environmental awareness on moral aspect win the appreciation of public.
  It is high time that we highlighted the significiance of moral consciousness.And goverment can set down cooresponding legislation and regulations.Only by enforcing the measure into practice,can our society be more harmonious,our enconomy be more prosperous,and we,as individuals,embrace more promising prospect.

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陌离53

陌离53 发表于 2014-10-22 08:40
可能还是不清楚，我还是打吧  英语一作文
  Moral consciousness does exert such a profound effect on ou ...

分段不明显呢。。moral consciousness 是第一段    The though-provoking drawings 是第二段   It is high time是第三段

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