我这个作文有四分不

hewei1987 · 发表于 2011-1-17 08:08

dear friend
I am writing to recommend one of my favorite movie to you
the movie which i favorite is drogen ball.I recommend it to you for three reasons.to begin with,zhou run fa in this movie is my favorite actor.what is more,this movie is a so wonderful movie that I have never seen and there are many beautiful girls in it().last but not the least,a cartoo which I favorite is called drogen ball too.thay are similar in some ways.
I hope you can like this movie
yours sincerely
LI MING

kidl14i2 · 发表于 2011-1-17 08:10

此文深戳我萌点

z50 · 发表于 2011-1-17 08:11

应该有
写得下么

ilwj1987 · 发表于 2011-1-17 08:11

[em:14]

hewei1987 · 发表于 2011-1-17 08:12

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恩，正好

hewei1987 · 发表于 2011-1-17 08:13

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怎么啦，我知道语法错误很多

hewei1987 · 发表于 2011-1-17 08:13

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是不是很好笑啊，

sansan2011 · 发表于 2011-1-17 09:20

this movie is a so wonderful movie that I have never seen and there are many beautiful girls in it()

哈哈哈哈哈

hewei1987 · 发表于 2011-1-17 09:24

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sansan2011 · 发表于 2011-1-17 09:26

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我很负责任的告诉你这是亮点
4分很简单。
字数够，不是抄的阅读理解，像个格式。
会有滴~

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