世纪高教《写作高分突破热点话题100篇》作文修改专贴

teresapu

老师大概是什么时间会改作文啊？等了好几天了呀~~~

xuancao0322

10年小作文（序列号站短）
                                                                                         Announcement
     An international conference on globalization will be held on May 26,2011. To successfully organize this meeting,50 volunteers are being recruited by postgraduates association.
    First of all ,the fundamental requirement for applicants is that they should be sophomore ,Chinese. Second, applicants also should have excellent capability of English-speaking and intercourse. Finally, if one enjoy offering service with the meeting, then the location is the very place where you should participate in.
    If you want to join us ,please send an e-mail of resume to us at volunteers @postgraduate association.com or  contract us at our telephone number 1234567.
    Welcome to join us !
                                                                                                                                                        Postgraduates Association

kasyo

2001年作文：

    As is shown in the picture, there's an oil lamp with a warm smile twinkling in the dark. Around it is the caption reading "Love is similar to a lamp,which is lighting brighter while the darkness is turning to be deeper."

    From the illustration, we could derive an symbolic meaning that love can assist people to be out of plight, just like the lamp can light the darkness. For a typical example, people generously subscribed to victims whose homes and families were taken away by the earthquake in Sichuan 2 years ago. Because of the contribution and the love which came from all over the world, the people afflicted by the natural disaster could stand up and resume their life tenaciously.

    Sending your love to other people, in my opinion, not need any significant reasons.Just stretch out your hand so long as someone need your help. And then,as is sung in the song----if everybody shares a little of love,the future of our world will be much brighter.

wosi12

2007年真题试卷后的练习题。
As is vividly depicted in the picture, a little cat is crouching in front of a mirror. Interestingly, what the mirror reflects is a great lion that much stronger than the cat. It seems the cat is frightened or is going to attack the mouse, so that the cat regards itself as the lion in order to gain confidence.

Undoubtedly, what the picture conveys is that confidence is essential element of success. I can think of no better illustration than the following example. It is known to all that the world economic has been experiencing a great depression that started in 2008, including China. In order to step out of the difficulty, Wen Jiabao, the China premier, spoke in a significant conference:” confidence is of more importance than gold.”  From then on, we Chinese were stimulated by the encouragement from him and the economic of china gradually revived in 2009 with his smart and outstanding leadership.

Hence, confidence, in my view, which is a valuable spirit, should be pursued by everyone. Owing to the quickening pace of life during the recession, competition goes increasingly fierce in all walks of life. People or countries can seldom accomplish the task without confidence . In a word, both people and countries need confidence to help them achieve tremendous success.

lhcxx

LZ，这本书今年什么时候出版啊，都等急死了，上海的考生