英语写作有五档，你是第几档？

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英语写作有五档，你是第几档？

● 一档：离题，胡说八道

● 二档：胡言乱语，没逻辑

● 三档：说人话

●四档：说漂亮话

● 五档：说有设计的漂亮话

● 高分/满分 =精彩语言、连贯结构、清晰内容

我们该如何向高分靠拢呢？我们就得学习高分模板，然后个性化，词汇要有高级词汇、句子要有高级句式，这些都是需要去积累哒~

一篇文章有三个框架：

开头+中间+结尾

开头段：话题引起 + 图画描述/图表描述/谚语说明/个人观点

示例1：

网购 online shopping

①所有人都注意到这样一个事实，网上购物在中国已经成了一个普遍现象。

②与此同时，网购的利与弊引起了公众的广泛关注。

词汇：

网上购物 online shopping

利 和 弊advantages and disadvantages

与此同时 Meanwhile

句式：

①所有人都注意到这样一个事实，

Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that

② ... 在中国已经成了一个普遍现象。

… has become a popular phenomenon in China

③ … 引起了公众的广泛关注。

… have aroused wide concern among the public

参考答案：

① Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that purchasing products online has become a popular phenomenon in China.

② Meanwhile, the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping have aroused wide concern among the public.

示例2：

Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to find a job somewhere and the other to start a business of your own.

①现在有一种趋势，越来越多的大学生在毕业之后选择创业。

②毕业之后是找工作还是创业，这个问题引起了公众广泛的关注。

词汇：

创业 ：start a business of one’s own

找工作：find a job

句式

①现在有一种趋势，

There is a growing tendency nowadays that …

②是… 还是… 这个问题引起了公众广泛的关注。

Whether one should do A or do B has aroused a heated discussion among the public.

参考答案：

① There is a growing tendency nowadays that an increasing number of college students would like to start a business of their own after graduation.

② Whether they should find a job or start a business has aroused a heated discussion among the public.

示例3：教育（投资）的回报

①引出话题：越来越多人意识到了学历和证书的重要性。

②图表描述：如表所示，失业率从博士以上学历人群的 1.9%明显上升到高中以 下学历人群的 14.9%。

③图表总结：尽管数字孤立，但紧密联系。

词汇：

证书和学历 degree and certificate

失业率 unemployment rate

高中学历 high school diploma

图表描述公式：

As is indicated in the chart, the number of 主题 + 变化 + 程度 + 范围 。

As is indicated above, the number of unemployment rate increases significantly from 1.9% to 14.9%

句式：

①越来越多人意识到了… … 的重要性。

There is a growing worldwide awareness of the importance of …

②如表所示，失业率从博士以上学历人群的 1.9%明显上升到高中以下学历人群的 14.9%。

As is indicated above, the number of unemployment rate increases significantly from 1.9% to 14.9%.

③尽管数字孤立，但紧密联系。

Isolated as the figures seem to be, they are connected to one another closely

参考答案：

① There is a growing worldwide awareness of the importance of degree and certificate.

② As is indicated above, the number of unemployment rate increases significantly from 1.9% of people who have a doctoral degree to 14.9 of people who have less than a high school diploma.

③ Isolated as the figures seem to be, they are connected to one another closely

示例4

Write an essay commenting on the saying, “Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make something happen.”more essay writing skills on essay.lxws.net

①当听到这句谚语的时候，我们很容易理解其寓意。

②这句话展现了作为一个参与者而不是观望者的重要性。

词汇：

寓意 implied meaning

参与者 participant

观望者 onlooker

句式：

①当听到这句谚语的时候，我们很容易理解其寓意。

When hearing the remark “…”, we can easily understand its implied meaning.

②这句话展现了… 的重要性。

This saying shows the importance of …

参考答案：

① When hearing the remark “Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make something happen”, we can easily understand its implied meaning.

② This saying shows the importance of being participants rather than mere onlookers.