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亚里士多德在《诗论》中曾经写过这么一段话： There are, of course, five grounds on which a passage can be censured: it is impossible; it is irrational; it is immoral; it is inconsistentand it is technically at fault. 简而言之，其实就是老师傅为作文是否低劣，给出了五大评判标准：不可能、不合理、不道德、前后矛盾、技术有缺陷。 反映在考研作文的评分标准上，这五个标准同样适用。不少考生背的范文不少，但是得分不高，其中原因主要包括以下几点：1）走题、2）内容空洞、3）逻辑混乱、4. 搭配语法错误多。 要想搞定考研英语写作，说白了就是要解决这四大问题，喵哥（微博@鬼谷一喵）在这里就结合2015年最新的大作文真题，给各位2016的考研小猫们支支招。 在哥看来，这考研英语的作文，有点像古代的那种八股文，每一段写的东西都很模式化的，都很固定的，纵观这十好几年的真题，本质上其实就分为三种： a）积极类，比如你我一起走南闯北，半瓶水等。 b）消极类的，比如旅行之余，温室花朵，养老足球赛。 c）中性类，文化火锅，网络的近与远等。 但是这三种模板的三段谋篇布局是一样一样的。描述图片+解释图片+我们该怎么办。有时候他会让你举一个人物的例子，这就更简单了，都是提前准备好的。别着急，后面都会说到，先说说这第一段。
第一段的话，80%的作文书，第一句准是as vividly+你看到图中的东西，都用烂了的！喵哥不用，喵哥的弟子就是与众不同。第一句怎么写，按下不表，哥先说第二句。这句一般大家会写，中文的意思是：这个东西对我们的生活产生深远的影响。 示例： Nowadays, with the increasing popularity of smart phones, it is not unusual to find a group of people sitting around the table, each playing with their smart phones separately instead of talking with each other face to face. As is vividly shown in the picture, the old lady is serving the table disappointedly, with all the other family members absorbed in their electronic products.（64 words）
第二段一般是要介绍这个PP的深远意义或者产生的原因，写三条。第二段一共五句话，第一句说这个主题意义，2~4句阐述意义或者解释原因，第五句一个总结搞定。 参考示例： The symbolic meaning of the photo is the effect of the mobile phone on people’s way of life. Undoubtedly, the phone provides us with considerable convenience, making many things possible which are beyond our dreams. As a communication tool, the phone makes us closer than ever before by providing immediate communication. What’s more, according to a recent statistic conducted by CASS, the past decade has witnessed a sharp increase in the percentage of people who supports the idea that mobile phone does exert such a profound effect on our life from 21% to 78%. （96words） 最后这个例子肯定是杜撰的，但是可以放心用，不仅所有话题均适用，毕竟只要有观点，就会有态度！就像网易说的，我们做的是有态度的新闻！而且7是人们最喜欢的数字，武当七侠，江南七怪，全真七子等，三七二十一，外加1%的误差，赞我！赞我！ 第三段很简单了，基本上全是模板上去就行了，但是要华丽丽的模板，拒绝千篇一律的垃圾模板。对于积极类的，我们要怎么让他做得更好；消极类的，我们怎么改变这一现状。 总结起来！ 全文如下： Nowadays, with the increasing popularity of smart phones, it is not unusual to find a group of people sitting around the table, each playing with their smart phones separately instead of talking with each other face to face. As is vividly shown in the picture, the old lady is serving the table disappointedly, with all the other family members absorbed in their electronic products.
The symbolic meaning of the photo is the effect of the mobile phone on people’s way of life. Undoubtedly, the phone provides us with considerable convenience, making many things possible which are beyond our dreams. As a communication tool, the phone makes us closer than ever before by providing immediate communication. What’s more, according to a recent statistic conducted by CASS, the past decade has witnessed a sharp increase in the percentage of people who supports the idea that mobile phone does exert such a profound effect on our life from 21% to 78%.
Joint efforts are needed to ensure people to have face-to-face communication! I believe a harmonious relationship between friends is awaiting us if we set aside our mobile phones and enjoy the untouched meal!（193 words）
完毕！ 这就是我对今年的考研作文进行的一个简单分析，欢迎各位来我的班级进行更加深入的学习。最后，往者不可谏，来者犹可追！嘱托15的考研党们一定要坚持战斗到底，祝愿2016的考研党来年好运！
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