声明：作文内容整合的是金翅前辈（大作文）和王江涛老师2014年的范文（小作文）必备模板。
死背下来的作文模板，请问你真的写的出来吗？
模板里的高级单词你都不认识，默写的出来吗？
英语作文真的不能死记硬背！
英语阅读都一题一题啃过来了。动笔现在写个属于自己的英文句子不难！
好好写下作文，就这么任性！晚上2个小时，筛选很多帖子，整合出的资源，不说了！识货的，下载吧。（格式已经修改过了，错误已经就纠正了，已经浓缩到最少了！）
大作文作文这么练！英语大作文一共分为三种。积极类，比如文化融合，合作，点一盏心灯等等，都可以用积极类的模板。另一种是消极类的，比如环境污染，温室花朵，过量捕鱼这是一类。还有一类就是中性类，自信啊，网络利与弊啊，这类的。
但是这三种模板的三段谋篇布局是一样的。描述图片+解释图片+我们该怎么办。有时候他会让你举一个人物的例子，这就更简单了。
第一段的话，80%的作文书，第一句准是as vividly+你看到图中的东西，都用烂了的，咱们不用，咱们的宗旨就是与众不同。第一句怎么写，咱们先不说，先说第二句。第二句一般会写，这个东西对我们的生活产生深远的影响。
例子，1、正如图片中生动形象的描画了一个文化火锅，里边有莎士比亚（后半句用非限定性定语从句，这个待会讲）。2、文化对人们的生活产生了深远的影响。所以金翅给出的第一段第2句（一、2用此表示，下同）的表达方法。
Multi-culture does exert such a profoundeffect on our life that it revolutionizes the way of people’s living andthinking.多元文化的确对我们的生活产生了深刻的影响，这种影响使我们生活和思考的方式发生了变革。大家想一想，是不是把多元文化替换成，网络、环境问题、合作、自信都很通顺呢，而且用does强调动词 exert，让人眼前一亮。这样咱们的一、2就完事了。现在说一、1，先上模板。As is subtly revealed in the portrayal，there is a hot-pot，which involves Shakespeare andBuddha.这句话的亮点在于非限定性定语从句，把两句话合二为一。有同学说了，这不还是as系列的么？这就需要变通啊，句子是死的人是活的呀。咱们的策略是把第一句和第二句调换一下位置，别让老师一看就是as，吐都吐死了。
综上所述第一段前两句是：
一、1：Multi-culture does exert such a profoundeffect on our life that it revolutionizes the way of people’s living andthinking.
一、2 :As is subtly revealed in theportrayal，there is a hot-pot，which involves Shakespeare and Buddha. 多元文化对我们的生活产生了深刻的影响，这种影响使我们生活和思考的方式发生了变革。正如这幅图片所描绘的，这里有一个火锅，它包括莎士比亚和佛。是不是感觉“正如”用的有承上启下的作用呢？是不是很传神呢？11年的环境作文中，金翅用的此法，从最后结果来看，分数还是灰常让我满意的。 第一段第三句就很简单了，一般一张图下边会有一句话或者一个注释，咱来个中译英就行了，前边要加上修饰的模板。
一、3：And below the cartoon，there is a topic which says：the cultural hotpot is bothdelicious and nutritious. 要是没有配文字怎么办呢？咱也有办法。用一个感叹句搞定，What a meaningful hotpot！有人说就一个感叹句四个词，后边会不会凑不齐字数呢？前边不是说过了么，文思如尿崩，思如泉涌，不必担心字数。额，最好还是担心一下，字数别写不下了。当时11考场上写到最后一段，结果还剩三行，无奈最后一段草草收尾的。第一段的三句话，咱们就都介绍完了。
第二段一般是要介绍这个图的深远意义或者产生的原因，写三条。第二段一共五句话，第一句说这个主题很有意义，2~4句阐述意义或者解释原因，第五句一个总结搞定。模板来啦，看官注意啦~~
二、1：The thought-provoking drawing mirrors acommon phenomenon in contemporary society that there is the positive influenceof cultural blending. (用了一个同位语从句,要是消极类的就用negative)
二、2-----二、4分别写三条理由意义，可以用First and foremost，What is more，Last but not least来连接，也可以不用，这个看个人习惯。
万能积极理由(10条)：
1、*** can broaden our horizon ,enlargeour scope of knowledge and enrich our spiritual civilization.（***拓宽我们的视野，扩大我们的知识面，丰富我们的精神文明。积极类的王牌理由，适合很多题材，网络，文化，读书，而且用到了罕有的修辞——排比。气势磅礴，大开大合，老师眼前一亮）
2、*** provides us with convenience.(最万能的理由，凡是有优点的，都能给我们提供方便，你就想吧，是不是？)
3、*** meet such kind of need inphysical and psychological aspects.（满足我们的身心健康，短小精悍）
4、Of all the ingredients ofsuccess,*** seems to be the first within our control.（在成功的所有元素中，***看似是我们最能把我的。是个意志品质类的话题，自信，合作都可以拿来直接用，而且相当的华丽）
5、*** win the appreciation of thepublic.（***赢得了公众的共识，有重要的用处，后边说。）
6、*** is a kind of lubricant for interpersonalrelationships.（***是一种人际关系的催化剂。网络、多元文化，爱心，适合很多题材。）
7、stimulate one’s interest and tapone’s potential.(刺激我们的兴趣，激发我们的潜能)
8、Nothing, except***,can play a moreindispensable role in the cultivation of one’s personality.（华丽的句式多变，凑字数的佳句啊）
9、*** is an essential element ofsuccess.（没词时救场用的）
10、*** is the immortal theme ofharmonious development. （没词时救场用的）
万能消极理由(4条)：
1、the goal of achieving a harmonioussociety may fall through under the negative influence of ***.（超万能，所有的消极的东西，不论是环境污染，网络问题，温室花朵，过分捕鱼，交通拥挤，都会引起社会的不和谐，或许仅仅是在某一小方面。考研作文么，沾边就对，不要太计较细节，老师也没时间细想，放心的用吧。）
2、*** bring great loss to both the individual andthe whole society.（***对个人和社会带来损失）
3、*** kill a great mass of time.（浪费大量的时间）
4、It is an epitome of thedisharmonious relation between the society and human being in a specific aspectof ***（这是一个人类和社会在***方面不和谐的缩影，五星级的华丽句子，***可以是环境，可以是网络，可以是交通）
用几个像样的人名：
BillGates，for instance，who is the Chief Executive Officerof Microsoft，won the champion of Forbes/World’s Richest People in 2009.It is ***thatmakes his company successful. 比尔盖茨是09年“服不服”排行榜的第一名
LiuXiang，for instance，who is a famous athlete，won the champion of the110-meter-hurdle race of the Athens Olympic Games .It is ***that makes himsuccessful.刘翔雅典奥运会110米栏的冠军。
这两个例子足够把所有的意志品质类的包含进去，可以放心使用。
前文交待，第二段一共5句话。二、1已经说过写法了，2~4句从上文的理由中挑3条就行了。但是我们还觉得不够华丽，所以我们把第4句改的更华丽，并且把第5句引出来。2,3句继续用万能理由没问题。
我们第四句用的一个小技巧就是科学统计法，直接上句子，再讲解。
According to the recent statisticconducted by CASS——Chinese Academy of Social Science，the past decade has witnessed a sharpincrease in the percentage of people who supports multiculture from 21% to 78%.（根据中国社科院最近的统计数据，过去的十年里有一个飞速的增长——支持多元文化的人从21%增长到了78%） 这句话很讲究，首先引入CASS，字母大写吸引老师的眼球，茫茫多的小写字母中，四个连续的大写，肯定能吸引住老师，恰好这句话又是华丽丽的给力，那么这句话就差不多达到目的了。那个——后边的解释，说实话是凑字数的，要是你的字数太多了，可以把CASS换成CCTV或者China Daily，然后就不用解释了。其次用sharp，很与众不同。再结合witness高级用法，足够让老师震撼。但我们觉得让老师就这样给分不满足，然后用两个数字把老师彻底征服了。根据心理学的统计，0~9十个数字中，7是人们最喜欢的数字，所以咱们自己编的两个数字里尽量要有7。第一个数3*7=21，而且三七二十一是句俗语，应该是个常见的数字，第一个数用暗7。第二个数用明7,而且8是个人间人见人爱的数字，78这个数就出来了。积极类的数字可以随便编，消极类的数字要谨慎点编，别太离谱了。此时老师已经顺利落入咱们预先设计的圈套中，如果不15+，他会感觉这次判卷生涯不完美的。闲话少说，咱们继续。
第四句出来了，怎么接第五句呢？前文说这个数字增长得很快。如果是好的东西增长的很快，比如支持文化融合的人越来越多了，那么后边接万能积极理由5：
That is to say，multiculture win the appreciationof the public.
如果是坏的东西越来越多了，比如污染面积从**%增长到**%
That is to say，This problem is getting worse andworse.
有同学觉得这句话没说完，变得越来越严重了，然后呢？这就正好引出咱们的第三段，建议措施段。
第三段很简单了，基本上全是模板上去就行了，但是要华丽丽的模板，拒绝千篇一律的垃圾模板。对于积极类的，我们要怎么让他做得更好；消极类的，我们怎么改变这一现状。
It ishigh time that we+动词的过去式，是一个虚拟语气的结构，千万要注意。
积极类：强调好的东西对我们的重要。
It is high time that we highlighted thesignificance of ***（如multiculture） and cultivated the citizens’ awareness that ***（如multiculture） is essential to us.
消极类：因为前文说的坏的东西增长的很快，所以接下来我们就要控制这种增长的趋势。然后就ZF和个人两个方面来说明做法。
It is high time that we took effectivemeasures to curb this trend. As far as the government is concerned, it shouldset down corresponding legislation and regulations. As for us, we should arousethe awareness of public towards ***（如Internet）.
中性类的最后一段，在消极类的基础上加一句话。说明这个东西本身没有好坏之分，我们需要掌握一个度，比如还是网络问题。句子如下：
I cherish a belief that *** themselvesare not good or bad and we can benefit a lot from *** as long as we take a goodcontrol over them.不要觉得good bad这样的小学词汇就不屑于用，咱们都华丽了三段了，也要缓解一下老师激动兴奋的情绪.这样最后一段就差不多完事了，但是最好再来一个完美的总结。三种类型都通用的总结，如下：
Only byenforcing these measures into practice, can our society be more harmonious, oureconomy be more prosperous, and we, as individuals, embrace more promisingprospect.(只有我们把这些措施付诸实施，社会才能更加和谐，经济才能更加繁荣，我们作为个人才能拥抱一个更加有希望的未来。气势磅礴的排比句，给你的作文画上一个圆满的句号)
积极理由
1、*** offers extensive opportunitiesfor every country in the world.
2、The majority of students believethat *** will provide them with more opportunities to develop theirinterpersonal skills ,which may put them in a favorable position in the futurejob markets.大部分学生相信***会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力,而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的.【这句话也是五星级的，***可以是part-time job、网络，文化交流等等，思路要开阔】
3、Judging from the socialcomprehensive factors, we can safely conclude that the Internet will change thelives of an untold number of people forever .根据社会等综合因素，我们可以有把握地得出这样的结论：网络将永远改变无数人的生活。【科学统计法的有一个例子，把Internet换成文化，自信，合作也很OK了，而且用了safely conclude语气非常得体，推荐】
4、By taking a major-related ***,students can not only improve their academic studies, but also gain muchexperience, which they will never be able to get from the textbooks.学生不仅可以提高学习成绩，还可以获得在课本上学不到的经验。【兼职，网络，读书等等之类的话题】
5、For the majority of people, ***has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness andcontentment 对于很多人来说，***占据了他们的生活和充实了他们的生活。【适用很多积极类的话题，句式复杂多变，推荐】
消极理由
1、这里的万能理由，重点说一下not only but also这个五星搭配的用法。个人感觉很强大的一个句子，私下里多造几个句子。
主语+ not only results in+*** but also does harm to***since****不仅导致**而且对**有危害，因为***
这个用法给出几个例子
Spendingtoo much time on the games not only results in failure in their study but alsodoes harm to their health since they keep still in front of the computer andwatch the computer without blinking the eyes.
Heavyburdens of homework not only results in the loss of interest in the study forstudents but also does harm to the physical and mental health since thechildren are overworked and have no time for rest or relaxation.
2、Never before in history has theissue of overpopulation been more evident than now .历史上，人口过剩的问题从来没有比现在更加突出。【适合一切消极类的话题，人口过剩、环境污染、攻的】
3、There is a growing worldwideawareness of the need for strengthened environmental protection .世界上越来越多的人认识到加强环境保护的必要性。【把加强环境保护可以换成消极类的主题】
4、Greed and a total lack of socialconsciousness have been cited as major reasons for the ever-increasing pollution.人们认为贪婪和社会意识的彻底缺乏是造成污染持续增加的主要原因。【把pollution换成交通等问题是不是很合适呢？有同学说交通怎么能跟贪婪搭边呢？人要是没有开私家车的欲望，那也不会有这么车，也不会有那么多的交通问题。所谓万能理由能自圆其说就行，不必纠结于细节。另：ever-adj.是一个构词法，译为不断/一直...的，ever-increasing 译为不断增长的，是一个高级用法，希望版友们能学会这个用法】
5、Rapid economic growth may lead toan overextension of resources and lead to an eventual catastrophic meltdown .经济迅速增长可能导致过度使用资源，并引起最终巨大的灾难。【消极类的，比如经济过度增长、能源过度消耗，交通问题增多，都很适用】
解释说明意义
1、With the development of oursociety, the campus no longer is an "Ivory Tower".随着社会的进步，大学校园不再是一个象牙塔。【校园类的话题】
2、No invention has received morepraise and abuse than Internet.没有一项发明象互联网同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评.【中性类话题适用】
3、An increasing number of people arebeginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束.【换成读书，志愿者，弘扬文化之类的积极类话题】
4、A proper part-time job does notoccupy student's too much time .In fact ,it is unhealthy for them to spend allof time on their study .As an old saying goes :All work and no play makes Jacka dull boy.一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间,事实上,把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康,正如那句老话:只工作,不玩耍,聪明的孩子会变傻.【把part-time job换成网络，运动什么的都很适合】
5、The direct correlation betweenself-esteem and success also applies to one's ability to achieve.自尊和成功的直接联系也适用于一个人取得成就的能力。【适合意志品质类的文章，self-esteem可以换成自信、合作各种好的意志品质】
小作文这么练！ （一）订购信
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to thesales department of a bookstore to ask for:
1 ） detailed information about thebooks you want,
2 ） methods of payment,
3 ） time and way of delivery
Writeyour letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET2.
Do notsign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.
You donot need to write the address. (10 points)
Dear Siror Madam,
第一段：As I am planning to take the National Entrance Test of English forMA/MS Candidates
(NETEM) ,I have decided to place an order of some NETEM books with due consideration ofthe
goodreputation of your bookstore and the high quality of your books.
第二段：Firstly, please give me particular accounts as regards names, authors,publishing houses
andprices of these books. Secondly, I also need to know the terms of payment andafter-sell
service.Thirdly, I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver these books by ExpressMail Service
to the headquartersof Beijing New Oriental School by January 4, 2014.
第三段：I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of myrequests. I look
forwardto hearing from you soon.
Yourssincerely,
Li Ming
尊敬的先生或女士：
由于我计划参加全国硕士研究生入学考试英语考试，充分考虑到贵书店的良好声誉和书籍的优良品质，我决定订购一些考研英语书籍。首先，请给我关于这些书的书名、作者、出版社、价格的详细信息。其次，我也想知道付款方式和售后服务。第三，我想知道您是否方便把这些书通过特快邮政专递在 2014年 1 月 4 日前送到北京**学校总部。非常感谢您好心考虑我的请求。期待着尽快得到您的答复。您真诚的，李明
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boss, Mr.Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason(s), and making an apology.
Dear Mr.Wang,
第一段：I am much grateful to be employed by you two months ago as an editorfor your
magazineDesign & Fashions. I appreciate the opportunity of having worked here withyou and
othercolleagues. The experiences will be unforgettable throughout my life.
第二段：However, as a young man whose primary interest is in computer sciencerather than
fashiondesigning, I find my present job doesn't fall in with my previous training andstrength. I
thereforedecide to quit this job for something else that may conform to my former preparation.
第三段：Please accept my sincere apologies for any inconveniences my leavingmay cause.
Yourstruly,
Li Ming
尊敬的王先生：
十分感激您两个月之前聘用我为杂志《设计与时尚》的编辑。我非常珍惜这个和您
以及其他同事共事的机会。这将是我一生中的难忘经历。
但是， 对于一个喜欢计算机科学远多于时尚设计的年轻人来说， 我认识到目前的工
作并不符合我的教育背景与个人能力。因此，我决定辞职，找一份与我从前教育背景相关的
工作。我为离开可能造成的不便深表歉意。您真诚的，李明
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Dear Siror Madam,
第一段：Moved by the noble cause of Project Hope and encouraged by what hasbeen achieved
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remotearea of your province.
第二段：I would be much grateful if you could help me seek out a girl who hasjust started
schoolingbut whose family cannot afford her education. My plan is to pay for her tuitionon an
annualbasis till she finishes her secondary education. I would like to remit mydonation directly
to a bankaccount opened by her family in her local area.
Yourstruly,
Li Ming
尊敬的先生或女士：
希望工程这项高尚的事业感动了我，同时这项工程迄今所取得的成就也鼓舞了我。
因此， 我想通过给贵省偏远地区的一个孩子提供经济帮助， 来为希望工程贡献我的微薄之力。如果您能帮助我找到一个刚开始上学但家庭无法为其负担学费的小女孩， 我将不胜
感激。 本人计划按年度支付她的学费直至她中学毕业。 我希望把捐款直接汇给她的家人在当地开设的银行帐户中。您真诚的，李明
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2) maketwo or three suggestions.
DearEditors,
第一段： I have been reading your newspaper for many years with a greatenthusiasm and interest.
It is myview that limiting/prohibiting the use of disposable plastic bags is of utmostsignificance.
第二段：To crack this hard nut, I would like to give/offer/render/proposesome/several
useful/practical/conduciverecommendations as follows. First and foremost, it is imperative for us
to banthe free use of disposable plastic bags. In addition, we should developpossible alternative
forms toreplace them, such as paper or clothing bags. Last but not least, plastic bagsshould be
offeredin a much higher price in department stores or supermarkets.
第三段：I hope you would find the above proposals conducive and I would like todiscuss this
matter tofurther details. Your prompt attention to my suggestions would be highlyappreciated.
(125words)
Yourssincerely,
Li Ming
尊敬的编辑：
多年来我一直怀着极大的热情与兴趣阅读贵报。 我认为限制使用一次性塑料袋非常
重要。为解决这个难题，我想提出如下几个实用的建议。首先，我们急需禁止免费使用一
次性塑料袋。其次，我们应该开发取代塑料袋的替换方式，如纸袋或布袋。最后，在商场或
超市应以更高的价格提供塑料袋。我希望您觉得上述建议有益， 同时希望进一步讨论这一问题。 十分感谢您对我的建议给予及时的关注。您真诚的，李明
（五）感谢信
Directions:
You havejust come back from the U.S as a member of Sino-American cultural exchange
program.Write a letter to your American colleague to
1 ） express your thanks to his/herwarm reception,
2 ） welcome him/her to visit China indue course.
Dear Bob,
第一段：I have just arrived at my home from the airport. As I sit behind thedesk, I just want to
write aletter to you. I am grateful for your warm reception in this cultural exchangeprogram. You
and yourfamily gave me a deep impression. The program is one of the most wonderfulmemories
in mylife.
第二段：In once talk you said you want to travel in China. Well, you will bewelcomed and it will
be mypleasure to be your guide. By the way, send me a list and write down the placeswhere you
wouldlike to visit.
第三段：Please give my best regards to your family. (110 words)
Sincerelyyours,
Zhang Wei
鲍勃：
我刚从机场回到家里。坐在书桌后面时，我只想给你写封信。在这次文化交流项目
中，非常感谢你的热情接待。你和你的家人给我留下了深刻的印象。这个项目是我一生中最
美好的回忆之一。你曾经说过你想来中国旅行。好吧，非常欢迎，而且我很荣幸做你的导游。顺便说一句，给我列张单子，写下你想去的地方。请向你的家人致以诚挚的祝福。你真诚的，张伟
（六）备忘录/报告：
Directions:
You arethe president of a company. Write a memo to George Gordon Byron, the
vice-presidenton the employee’s training on computer, telling him the need to train the
employees,detailed information, and ask him to write a plan.
Date：January 4, 2014
To：George Gordon Byron, VicePresident
From：Li Ming, President
Subject：Computer Training of the Staff
第一段：As we discussed earlier this week, I agree with you that our firm isfaced up with
problemof the high rate of computer illiteracy of the staff. We need to make up a planfor
trainingour employees in the new field.
第二段：I would like you to design our own in-house computer-training program.We had better
classifythe employees and put them through the program in turn.
第三段：Write up a brief proposal, describing what you think the program shouldcover. Assume
the classruns four hours a week for ten weeks. Also, assume people have no priorcomputer
knowledgeor any formal course work in computer science.
日期：2014 年 1 月 4 日
致：乔治·戈登·拜伦，副总裁
自：李明，总裁
主题：员工计算机培训
正如我们本周早期讨论的那样，我同意你的看法：我们公司正在面临员工高比率电
脑盲的问题。我们需要制定一个计划，在这个新的领域培训员工。
我想让你制定我们自己的内部计算机培训计划。我们最好把员工分类，让他们轮流
参加这个项目。写一个简要的计划，涵盖你认为这个项目需要包括的内容。假定培训为十周，每周四小时。同时假定员工在计算机方面没有任何预先的知识或没有参加过正式课程。
（七）招募启事
Directions:
You aresupposed to write for the postgraduate association a notice to recruit volunteersfor
aninternational conference on globalization. The notice should include the basicqualification of
applicantand the other information you think relative.
Youshould write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do notsign your own name at the end of the notice. Use “postgraduate
association”instead. (10 points)
Notice
第一段：Volunteers are needed for the International Conference on Globalizationto be held on
thiscampus in early July. Basic requirements are familiarity with the theme of theconference and
proficiencyof English. Other requirements include interpersonal communication ability,
familiaritywith our city in terms of its tourist attractions and its history, propermanners, and
sense ofresponsibility. Priority and preference will be given to those experienced,either in
internationalconference or in other similar activities.
第二段：Call 86754321 or send messages to postgr_ass@ccc.edu.cn for anapplication and for
informationon the interview. Enquiries are encouraged but visits declined. （97words）
ThePostgraduate’s Association
告示
七月初将于本校举行关于全球化的国际研讨会，现招募志愿者。基本要求是熟悉本次会议的主题以及精通英语。其他要求包括人际沟通能力、熟悉我市的景点及历史，举止适当以及责任感。在国际会议或其他类似活动中具有相关经验者优先考虑。申请职位以及咨询面试相关信息请致电86754321或发送邮件postgr_ass@ccc.edu.cn欢迎垂询，谢绝来访。研究生会
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