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英语一
These days the Net, has already re-made such everyday lifestyle as purchasing commodities, is reshaping the way of shopping. As is conspicuously betrayed in the drawing above, a man is setting out to enter his laptop, with a shopping cart he pushes. Online shopping does exert such significant influence upon our daily life.
    There are numerous factors triggering off the phenomenon, and I would explore only a few of the most crucial ones here. To begin with, coincident with the dramatically development of Chinese economy has been the great ameliorations achieved in the high-tech domain, what converts our life overwhelmingly is the internet.
Further more, online shopping is extremely convenient and we can buy what we desire to obtain without going out. Net has invariably been in a lieu where merchandize is more dirt-cheap than stores in the city’s flourishing street.
        Every coin has two sides. Online shopping that brings the greatest advantage carries the greatest potential for loss and disappointment. Firstly, we cannot touch what we purchase on the internet and the pictures of goods in the screen might bring you an bogus perceive. To top it off, miscellaneous shopping on the internet put pressure on the traffic and the physical stores.

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点火樱桃 发表于 2014-11-11 17:27
怎么做到的？没有添加图片的地方啊。。。

你的回复界面是这样的吗？

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奋斗的斑鸠 发表于 2014-11-11 18:25
你的回复界面是这样的吗？

不是啊。。好吧iOS版太low了(ｰ ｰ;)

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英语一，网购，辛苦老师指点一下
     As is shown above, in the middle of the picture lies a laptop, with a man facing the screen and wheeling a shop trolley on the keyboards. But is this what the author means to tell us? Certainly not ! The picture has subtly reflected the social phenomenon that shopping online is such prevailing nowadays, which play a key role in our daily life.
     It is no doubt that nobody could have failed to notice the fact that shopping on the Internet does exert such a profound effect on our life that it revolutionizes the way of people 's living and thinking. The past decades have witnessed many great changes in China, with the above one being the most far-reaching. According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily, money spent on online shopping in China this year is as 10 times as that of 2013, which is due to the Internet that provide us with convenience so we could be able to buy almost whatever we want, such as delicious food, fashionable clothes, handsome automobiles or even comfortable dwellings as well, without going out. Besides, this new pattern of shopping saves people a great deal of time by eliminating time spent on the road, thus we can make the most use of time and concentrate more time and energy on other meaningful work. Last but not the least, from my personal perspective, it is a means of entertainment that relieves one's pressure, boredom, stress and burden.
     In summery, while some people may remain unconvinced by my discussion, but the analysis I have offered at least make them aware of the significance of this fashionable trend.I cherish a belif that we can benefit a lot from the online shopping as long as we take a good control of it.

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yephon2008 发表于 2014-11-11 19:11
顶！27分！

太看得起了

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