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备考小弟

作文随手写 老师来评分 英语一

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小黄瓜2014 发表于 2014-10-17 17:15
从小学开始，就讨厌写作文，后来才知道英语作文才是真的痛啊

同感同感。讨厌写作文

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备考小弟

604114279 发表于 2014-10-18 14:45
怎么发呢

直接回复帖子就好

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kaname2

周末来一篇，这个活动好，大家作文都开始准备了么？？我还没开始，正好督促了！

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kaname2

云淡风轻地盘 发表于 2014-10-18 12:39
为什么进去之后发不了图片，不是说可以把写好的作文拍下来传图吗，为什么发不了，难道要直接写在帖子里？？ ...

你不是发了么……

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龙呼晴

为么我发作文帖子说我包含不良信息，我是大大的良民呢

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tingzhou1990

顶一个

心给唯一的他

请点评。。。谢谢

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龙呼晴

The set of pictures above vividly depict the different behaviors of people treated with litters.In the first picture，wearing a pair of cool sunglasses,a beautiful dress and a pair of fashionable shoes trimmed with glitter rhinestones,a very charming girl throws away a banana skin in despite of a dustin not far away and then goes away happily with her bare banana.Ironically,in the second picture,a disable man who has only one leg is laboriously picking up the peer thrown by that striking girl.
      The purpose of the cartoons is to show us that beauty is far beyond something superficial and due attention should be paid to the cultivation of inner personality.The gorgeous girl is naturally associated with those who are lack of real beauty,just caring about the appearance themselves;the disable man epitomizes those who have golden hearts which are the most valuable in the world.It is apparent that the golden hearts are more honorable than the beauty of the shallow girl.
       Hence,it is imperative for us to cultivate the inner beauty.For one thing,we should enhance the awareness of people that inner beauty is great significance to us.For another,we should appear to the authorities concerned to emphasize on the publicity of fine people and fine deeds.Only in this way can everyone be more perfect,and only in this way can each corner of our society be lit up by beauty.

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