考研复试自我介绍

tinyjoy

make

yunboy1

是不是太长了...

舰载机飞行员

这个必须顶一下！

llsdut

谢谢分享

栖桐

真的很好。

桃花逐水流

顶一下

路漫漫求索

很好，自己要改下内容

外语小飞侠

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I have deeply impressed by the academic atmosphere.  病句。
改后：I'm deeply impressed by the academic atmosphere.

The second is I am long for doing research in Detection Technology and Automatic Equipment.  病句。
改后：The second is that I'm longing for doing research in Detection Technology and Automatic Equipment.  
long这里作动词用法，因此应该用ing形式。

First I will improve my ability to write academic paper and make a good knowledge of how to do academic research and be a excellent scholar.
改后：First I will improve my ability in writing academic paper and academic research and then try my best to be an excellent scholar.

I believe that one’s success in not just about luck, what’s more, it is about hardworking and perseverance. Thus I come here today.
改后：
I believe that one’s success is not just about luck, what’s more, it is about hardworking and perseverance.  That's why I come here today.

  From some relative books about traffic identification, I get that process tomography (PT) is a widely available and flexible imaging technique that is a new measuring method applied in measuring multi-phase flow.
改后：
  From some books related to traffic identification, I figure out that process tomography (PT) is a widely available and flexible imaging technique which is a new measuring method applied in measuring multi-phase flow.

Four years’ university education gives me a lot of things to learn, a lot of chances to try, and a lot of practices to improve myself.
改后：
Four years’ university education teaches me a lot and offers me a lot of precious chances and practices to improve myself.

yzy131

嗯，重要的是别让面试老师感觉你在背诵。

毅然，前行

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