四六级写作必备：做好小事的重要性

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复习一篇作文，重点是范文中的句子，我把这些句子称之为“功能表达”，也就是说，背写的时候要注意两点：功能+表达。

功能，就是说这句话的作用，可能是表现象、观点、建议、展望未来、意义、危害、概述图画等

表达，重点是英文句子的框架，如果一句话特别长，先背英文框架。背会了框架（句子主干），再添加一些修饰成分，就是一个复杂的长句子，显得水平高了点

当然，今天发的内容都是上课讲过的，你看看就当是复习了；如果没时间看，也没关系，记得多听课。

1. 图画作文:优秀品质(做好小事很重要)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

下面是范文，你要重点记得是句子，句子的前后顺序可以调整；句子很多，可以不全部背写，选几个跟自己有缘的、能背会的就行。当然，这些句子对于六级备考，也有一定帮助，但更建议你去听六级的赵婕和袁雨斌老师讲授的写作课内容，更系统、更全面、针对性更强。

首段:图画描述

This drawing, apparently, can be associated with the critical significance of doing small things. In the picture, the youngster expresses his worries about “disposing of nuclear waste”. To his surprise, his father points at the dustbin, telling him that if he can empty the dustbin there, he can do anything.

二段:图画主题 + 现象 + 意义

The father means that if young people dream to achieve success, it is sensible for them to start with little jobs. Admittedly, in the present-day society, it is a common phenomenon for many teenagers to neglect tiny things in life, such as cleaning rooms, washing clothes and emptying dustbins. Why? The reason is that a growing number of young people find it rather useless to deal with these things. A typical example is the boy in the picture. Nonetheless, it is these small tasks that ensure young people to master sufficient knowledge, competence and experience. Actually, wise people in large numbers have come to recognize the significance of these small things. Doing small things brings us skills, arouses our passion for success and helps us to make progress.

尾段:观点 + 建议 + 展望

As a college student, I am convinced that it is exceedingly necessary for young people to strengthen our comprehensive quality by doing small things. Accordingly, we should educate and encourage our friends and acquaintances to foster this positive awareness and habit. We, sparing no efforts to do so, may witness a hopeful and promising future of our work and study. Everyone should bear in mind that a big success originates from everyday small progress.(282 词)

显然，这幅图能自然联系到做好小事的重要性。图画中，一个年轻 人表达了自己对“核废料处理”的担忧。使他感到吃惊的是，他爸爸指 着垃圾筐告诉他，如果能把垃圾筐清空，他就能做好一切。

父亲的意思是，如果年轻人想要成功，就应该明智地从小的工作开 始做起。确实，在当今社会，很多年轻人忽略身边的各种小事已经成为 一种常见现象，例如打扫房间、洗衣服和清理垃圾筐。为什么?因为越 来越多的年轻人觉得处理这些小事没有用。一个典型例子就是图画中的 小孩。然而，正是这些小事确保年轻人能掌握足够的知识、能力和经验。事实上，很多聪明人已经意识到这些小事的重要性。做好这些小事带给 我们技能，唤起我们对成功的热情，帮助我们进步。

作为一名大学生，我坚信年轻人很有必要通过做好小事提升自己的 整体素质。因此，我们应该教育和鼓励我们的朋友和熟人培养这种积极 的意识和习惯。如果我们不遗余力地这样来做，未来我们的工作和生活 将充满光明和希望。每个人都应该牢记大的成功源自于每天小的进步。

下面为大家附上优秀品质类话题词，更英文写作写作技巧请登录assignment.lxws.net查看

悲观 / 乐观 pessimism/ optimism
勤奋 diligence n./ diligent adj.
耐心 patience n./ patient adj.
尊老爱幼 respect the old and care for the young
创新 innovation n./ innovate v./ innovative adj.
感谢 gratitude n./ appreciation n.
美德 virtue n.
谨慎 prudence n./ prudent adj.
逆境 setbacks
成功无捷径 There is no shortcut to success.
终身学习 lifelong/ lifetime study
幽默感 a sense of humor
沟通 communication
身心健康 physical and mental health
捐献 donation n./ donate v.
爱国主义 patriotism n.
奉献 contribution n./ contribute v.
梦想 ambition/ dream
机遇 opportunity
节约 thrifty adj./ thrift n.
奉献精神 the spirit of dedication
自信 self-confidence
诚实 honesty n./ honest adj.
谦虚 modesty n./ modest adj.
奋斗 strive v.
团队精神 & 合作 teamwork spirit & cooperation 竞争 competition n.
社会公德 public morality
责任 responsibility
内心美 inner beauty
和谐社会 harmonious society