中式英语之鉴，笔记2

王利层Eva

冗余的动词有4种情况

（《中式英语之鉴》page6-page13）


冗余动词+名词；名词成了信息重点，把名词改成动词，谓语动词一般才是信息的重点。

第1种的变形，即 名词+动词的被动形式

冗余动词+名词+其他；其他是信息重点，同上

动词+形容词+名词；形容词是信息重点


下面看对应例子,理解/记忆


1. 冗余动词+名词；把名词改成它的动词形式

A: to bring about a change in this state of affairs

B: to change this state of affairs.


A: They must make up their minds to implement the reform of the current system

B:They must make up their minds to reformthe current system


2. 第1种的变形，即 名词+动词的被动形式。

A: approval should be given to all these projects.

B: all these projects should be approved.


A:solutions to these problems can be found only through...

B:these problems can be solved only through...


3. 冗余动词+名词+其他；其他是信息重点

A：three garrison divisions were necessary to perform the task of guarding warehouses.

B: three garrison divisions were necessary to guard warehouses.


A: we must adopt the priciple of combining solutions to people\'s difficulties with long-term development

B: we should combine solvingpeople\'s immediate problems with promoting long-term development


 4. 动词+形容词+名词；形容词成了信息重点,可以换成它的动词形式


A：this measure will have a restrictive effect on the activities of speculators

B: this measure will restrict the activities of speculators.

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