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             烟花易冷
The Fireworks Of Transience

繁华声 遁入空门 折煞了世人
The secularity, retreating into sacred area,
flatters the ordinary world

梦偏冷 辗转一生 情债又几本
The dreams, chilly and entangled,
throws me into affectional loans


如你默认 生死枯等
wait for your promise beween us
despite of the looming death,

枯等一圈 又一圈的 年轮
nothing cames here
but years faded away

浮图塔 断了几层 断了谁的魂
the tower of buddhism fell down,
sacrificing nameless souls in the town

痛直奔 一盏残灯 倾塌的山门
The relentless anguish boils here，
The fallen tower lefting a faint flare

容我再等 历史转身
Next life a moment to trace again，
when the past begin to wane

等酒香醇 等你弹 一曲古筝
Your song could join in here
once the wine will be prapared

雨纷纷，旧故里草木深
My residence deserted there
In the drizzle，buried by veil


我听闻 你始终一个人
I was aware of your solitude
drifting all the time nowhere

斑驳的城门 盘踞着老树根
the rusty gate of city
entangled by old trees


石板上回荡的是 再等
The echos of your image，
from stones， still remains

雨纷纷 旧故里草木深
My residence deserted there
In the drizzle，buried by veil


我听闻 你仍守着孤城
I heard of you are still there
served as the only fighter

城郊牧笛声 落在那座野村
The flute in the wilderness,
drifts from town into loneliness

缘份落地生根是 我们
What was fated to meet，
ourselves，nevertheless

听青春 迎来笑声 羡煞许多人
Our affection bathed in bloom
wins the numberless green hues


那史册 温柔不肯 下笔都太很
but the time wears off our love
unmerciful and cruel

烟花易冷 人事易分
The fireworks are of transience，
Nothing is of permanence,


而你在问 我是否还 认真
But your doubt still lingers ,
could any loyalty last into endlessness

千年后 累世情深 还有谁在等
The fleeting of thousands of Centuries
and who will yet be here？

lynjon

厉害………………
不过貌似是直译的

xl1989

这水平  高啊

龙二2012

有两下子嘛，好了你通过