写了篇火锅，192字，没有用模板，没有用太多复杂的词，句型有一定的变换，但绝不花哨。我想这篇文章得分应该不会太低吧。只是想表达一下我的观点，不要过分追求各类范文那种花里胡哨的表达方式。我曾说过，如果基础不好，就尽量用简单句，结果遭到很多人的反对。其实，我的意思是，要根据自己的能力，首先做到少出语法错误，其次是增加几处亮点，老师又有什么理由扣分呢？这就好比体操比赛，难度高，起评分就高，但是一旦失败，最后得分就很低。
From the cartoon above, we can see a large hot pot containing various cultural elements, such as Buddism, Kongfu, Confucianism, Shakespear, Einstain, Taoism, and Peking opera, etc., rather than real food stuffs.
What the cartoonist actually wants to convey to us, in my opion, is that different cultures, western or oriental, should be mixed together to make our culture more rich and colorful. Just like a hot pot, which contains beef and vegetables, are delicious and nutritious, our culture will be definitely enriched to serve the construction of socialism if we can merge varied elements from different cultures into our culture.
As is known to all, a robust culture is an indispensible part of the harmonious society. Apparently, to build a robust culture requires different elements from different cultures. As Chairman Mao once said, make foreign things serve China, and make the past serve the present. Only if foeign and traditional elements are merged into our present culture, can we achieve the goal of building a national, scientific and popular culture. As a result, China will know the world better, thus eliminating misunderstanding and promoting good relationship between western countries and China.
发表于 2011-1-9 19:44
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