[原创]这是我当年的考研作文 自创了一套模板

寻路人123

这是本人原创, 转载请注明来源!thank you!

这篇文章是我08年的考研作文, 模版型很强, 是我查阅了不少资料,绞尽脑汁想出来的, 希望对后来的考研人有所帮助!

                                                    Cooperation
Drawing can be useful tools; a simple picture may reveal a profound truth. The illustration above, for example, is far from complicated, and yet carries deep implication: “where there is cooperation, there is a way”.

    As is conspicuously and vividly depicted in this painting, cooperation empowers two disable people to run fast and smoothly(本句取自经典25词:enable sb to do sth=empower sb  to do sth). As society becomes more and more advanced and complicated, we can anticipate that cooperation plays a more and more momentous and fundamental role in the life of individual members of society and in the development of society itself. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example to be mentioned below. A chain is only as strong as its weakest link, and the durability of a product depends on the part that fails first(本句来自自己为考研各大主题准备的排比素材). However, at present, a major common shortcoming among many Chinese people,to a considerable extent, is that they pay too much attention to individual abilities while ignoring cooperation which makes our work effective and efficient(源自**的并列用法).(本句来自“at present, a major common shortcoming among many students is that they pay too much attention to book learning while ignoring practical activities”的仿照)

    The problem mentioned above can be solved in several ways. First of all, we should make people aware of this issue. Besides, the changes must begin with ourselves, as it is momentous and fundamental that we address the problem within ourselves before looking others to change. In changing ourselves we change the world. Finally, whether we will maintain a happy, healthy, and harmonious society as we all wish when each and every citizen realize the seriousness of the problem mentioned above, as well as try our best to solve it or at least reduced the possibility of occurrence of those undesirable cases.[/size]

※ 编辑：寻路人123 于2009-5-12 20:46 编辑本文

寻路人123

觉得写得好就顶下!

夜游仙子

非常感谢!!楼主辛苦啦!!

SH-Ren

先顶,再看,楼主辛苦了`````

寻路人123

考研作文其实就是模板, 但如果你自己能创作出一套模板, 但让别人看不出这是模板, 就可以了。这是我的经验!

SANMU16564113

感谢楼主分享

sjxs2209

发现真爱

强人啊[em:42] [em:42] [em:42]

beck8382

感谢楼住,很有价值。
不过最后楼主得了多少分啊?

颍水之上

LZ太强了    学习。