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新东方4 6级考试作文辅导课程 讲义 第一课
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写作的三条原则：
1. practice 从现在开始到考试，规定至少写十篇作文；
2. input
3. vary：作文要强调的不是内容，而是语言。
注：practice n. 实行, 实践, 练习；input n. 输入,投入
逃税 cheat on tax flee tax(错误的表达)；vary 变化
例：
从图表中我们可以看出：在过去十年中，大学生花在电脑上的小时数是不断增加的。
In the past ten years, the number of hours a college student spent on the computer has been increasing.
上升，增长 ascend
It may affect his study if he spends too much time on the computer.
eyesight 视力； It may do harm to one's eyes.
对出题人的分析：
1.出题的内容
（1）关于大学生的话题；
How are Finance My College Education?；Reading Selectively Or Extensively?
campus life 校园生活
（2）常见的社会问题。
The Changes in People's Diet；The Changes in the Ownership of Houses
Traffic Jams；Traffic accidentes；Motorcycles；private cars 私人小汽车
考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。
How to Develop the World Economy?；非典 SARS
第二节
对出题人的分析：
1.出题的内容
（1）关于大学生的话题；
How are Finance My College Education?；Reading Selectively Or Extensively?
campus life 校园生活
（2）常见的社会问题。
The Changes in People's Diet；The Changes in the Ownership of Houses
Traffic Jams；Traffic accidentes；Motorcycles；private cars 私人小汽车
考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。
How to Develop the World Economy?；非典 SARS
2.出题的形式
六级考试作文的出题方式有：命题作文，看图画或图表作文，根据所给文章（英文或中文）写出文章摘要或大意，给出关键词作文等。
根据所给文章（英文或中文）写出文章摘要或大意，考的可能性很小。
给出关键词作文，只要你的作文中包含所给的词语就可以了。
car pollution；Nowdays cars cause serious pollution to the air.
So I prefer to go to school by bike.
(一)正反阐释题,比例35%；
(二)阐释原因、方法，描述危害题；
（三）永恒话题；Haste Makes Waste
（四）图表题;
（五）书信题。
3.要求：字数150，时间30分钟
试卷二上，改错和作文，应该集中精力先保证作文。
5 + 20 + 5
5 审题和构思，审题要求看懂题目，大约1、2分钟即可，构思就是简单的勾勒一下自己可能写到的内容。
20 写正文
5 改错，不要整句都改，改一些细小的地方，比如说，单复数，时态等。
第三节
对出题人的分析：
1.出题的内容
（1）关于大学生的话题；
How are Finance My College Education?；Reading Selectively Or Extensively?
campus life 校园生活
（2）常见的社会问题。
The Changes in People's Diet；The Changes in the Ownership of Houses
Traffic Jams；Traffic accidentes；Motorcycles；private cars 私人小汽车
考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。
How to Develop the World Economy?；非典 SARS
2.出题的形式
六级考试作文的出题方式有：命题作文，看图画或图表作文，根据所给文章（英文或中文）写出文章摘要或大意，给出关键词作文等。
根据所给文章（英文或中文）写出文章摘要或大意，考的可能性很小。
给出关键词作文，只要你的作文中包含所给的词语就可以了。
car pollution；Nowdays cars cause serious pollution to the air.
So I prefer to go to school by bike.
(一)正反阐释题,比例35%；
(二)阐释原因、方法，描述危害题；
（三）永恒话题；Haste Makes Waste
（四）图表题;
（五）书信题。
3.要求：字数150，时间30分钟
试卷二上，改错和作文，应该集中精力先保证作文。
5 + 20 + 5
5 审题和构思，审题要求看懂题目，大约1、2分钟即可，构思就是简单的勾勒一下自己可能写到的内容。
20 写正文
5 改错，不要整句都改，改一些细小的地方，比如说，单复数，时态等。
对改卷人的分析：
1.字体
字迹清楚、段落明朗 ： 先总后分 连词用上；写完检查 然后欣赏
关联词
In the first place, first of all, to begin with,
in the second place, furthermore, moreover, for one thing, for another, what's more, what's worse；finally；last but not least；Will spring be far behind if winter has come?
一般要求3段
只写一段者：0～4分；只写两段者：0～9分(指规定三段的作文)
② I think reading not only selectively but also extensively. Because the two sides are not contradict......
5分
注意文章各段的开头
graph：
从上面的图表中 from the above graph= from the graph above= from above the graph
为什么很多大学生喜欢读小说？
Why so many college students like reading novels?= Why do so many college students like reading novels?
语义上要高度概括
实例一
2003年1月Range-finders
It Pays to Be Honest
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1.当今社会上存在着很多不诚实的现象。
2.诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实。
第四节
实例一
2003年1月Range-finders
It Pays to Be Honest
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1.当今社会上存在着很多不诚实的现象。
2.诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实。
注：It Pays to Be Honest 诚实是有回报的
show→showing；show→that show/which show；product→products
honest→honesty；teach sb. to do sth.；honest→to be honest；economic→economy
①In our modern social life, there are many examples around us show many people are cheated. Advertisements cheat people, salesmen cheat people, even one's closest friends cheat him or her. So many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot help asking: where is our honest exist? ......
Everybody is taught honest in the primary school or even in the kindergarten. Honesty does good not only to ourselves, but to others as well.
②Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams.
③With the development of modern economic and industry, competitive is becoming more and more obvious. At the same time, the performance of dishonest is becoming more and more clearly.
注：economic→economy；industry→society；competitive→competition
obvious→fierce；increasingly；performance→phenomena
action behavior dishonest people
必须改正的语法错误:
1.词性 success n succeed v
2.单复数：电脑很有用 Computers are very useful
3.冠词
4.时态：作文基本上以现在时为主。
5.代词一致
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