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一、漫画
传统的三条中文提纲式作文；还是2011年12月那样给一句名人名言要求阐释；2013年12月的漫画作文----“三段式”作文来解决。
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第一段最关键要开篇点明自己的观点。如果是名人名言，可以转述名人名言的意思，并结合这一意思，找出一个论点;如果是漫画、图片、图表作文，简单1-2句话对漫画描述后，一定要从漫画中给出一些看法和与实际生活相关联的现象、问题、争议点。
Asis shown above in the picture, ....... Asis depicted above in the drawing, ....... Inthe illustration provided, ...... 描述中心事物：介词短语、定语从句、过去/现在分词。
Whatthis illustration wants to reveal is that ...... Thisdrawing is simple but thought-provoking. 第二段要围绕自己的观点进行有意义地展开。展开方式有以下几种：
1. 举例论证
举例论证时，结合你自身的例子是最容易有话说的论证方式。
Mayun,CEO of Alibaba, online marketplace for global trade,revolutionized China’s internet ecology.Without 品质, he can neither be one of the most widely recognizedrepresentatives of China's Internet entrepreneurs nor the richest man in Chinaearlier this year. Engagedin literature creation, Zhang Haidi depends on her persistent spirit toovercome the pain and difficulties, keeping on to creat successive literature,such as Dream of the Wheelchair. 2. 引用论证
引用论证就是可以用来自书籍Once I read a book,…;There is an old saying …“俗话说……”;或者中外名人曾说过。
3. 道理论证
一般主要从对引起某现象的原因或好现象带来的好处略述一二。
What has brought about this effect? Ibelieve there are three main reasons. To begin with, ____________________ (原因一).In addition, ____________________(原因二).Finally, ____________________。(再次总结原因。)
第三段重申观点 + 问题解决方法：向学校(the school)，机构( XX administration)，政府(the government)，每个人(every citizen / everyindividual)发出呼吁( I appeal to…)，给出建议(My suggestion is that …)
Insummary, 重申文章主题. What should be done firstis to make more people aware of the importance of environment protection.Meanwhile, related laws and regulations must be laid down to protect thefragile environment. Only in this way would we enjoy a wonderful society.
（2013.06）Thepicture shows us a dialogue between a father and a son.The son told his father, “Dad, I’m a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste”. While his father told him, “If you canempty the dustbin here you can do anything”. It reveals the importance of doing smallthings well before undertaking something big. There is also an old Chinesesaying to go with this that a person can’t sweepthe world before he can sweep his own room.
I agree onthe point that it is of great importance for a person to do small things wellbefore undertaking something big. First of all, doing small things well entail the qualities that needed indoing great things such as patience and ability of controlling time. Forexample, when we sweep our room, we need to manage our time and energyreasonably.What is more,if we sweep a bigger room, for example, a classroom with our classmates, weshould learn how to cooperate and allot assignments as well.In addition, a big advantage is thatwe can draw useful lessons from the failure of performing well because theydidn’t cost a lot.
Inanother word, though these things seem trivial, they reinforce our manipulativeability and thus our understanding to the world. Therefore, we should notignore the small things.
2013.12
This picture portrays an ironic situation n the road, stands a man, who is completely concentrating on his cellphonewhereas using a stick for direction, which implies the unprecedented popularityor even overusing cell phones nowadays.
Exaggerated as the picture is, thephenomenon behind it is rather thought-provoking. With the development ofhigh-tech equipment, especially smart phones, people in growing numbers tend tobecome addicted to the excessive use of them. According to a survey carried outin China Daily several days ago, almost 47% of citizens explain that they wouldexperience certain kind of anxiety without cellphones at hand. Meanwhile, theoverusing cellphones, firstly would exert detrimental impact on the health ofus. What's worse, it would perform a negative character in interpersonalrelationship since we have less time to communicate.
Judging from the evidence above, certainmeasures should be taken. Firstly, certain institutions in China should launchrelevant campaigns to limit the excessive use of cellphones. Moreover, we, ascollege students, should put emphasis on it right from ourselves as a start.
二、图表
第一段，现象引入段：图表反映主题，描述变化 Asis depicted in the table/chart, during the period from _______to _______,________rose from ________to _______, while _______ decreased from _______ to_______.
第二段，说明原因段：1、2、3
Webelieve that three reasons can account for this phenomenon. First,____. Second,____. Third, _____.
第三段，总结观点段：得出结论、总结全文、展望未来
___.Weare happy to see that things are becoming better and better nowadays. We canimagine that ___.
范文：Health Gains in Developing Countries
以下图为依据描述发展中国家的期望寿命(1ife expectancy)和婴儿死亡率(infant mortality)的变化情况
As is depicted in the table/chart,during theperiod from 1960 to 1990, the life expectancy of developing countries rose from40 years to nearly 60 years, while infant mortality decreased from 200 deathsper 1000 births to around 100.
We believe that three reasons can accountfor this phenomenon. First, economy develops quickly in developing countriesduring this period, and living quality improves significantly as a result.Second, people's health conditions also become better and better with thedevelopment of national health care systems. When they become richer andricher, they care more about personal health conditions. Third, medicalsciences also develop at a fantastic speed, and it is much safer for mothers togive birth.
We are happy to see that things are becomingbetter and better nowadays. We can imagine that people will live longer and theinfant mortality will again fall.
三、说明文
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