发个自己的英语小作文，大家帮忙看下吧

青葱蒜苗 · 发表于 2014-12-30 22:58

Volunteers Wanted
May I have your attentions please? In order to recruit a group of excellent high school students and spread our university's fame, the official delegated the students' union to host a summer camp. The summer camp will be held in (忘记用的on还是in了)July 1st and will last for ten days. So we decide to recruit several volunteers to serve the summer camp. Recruiters have to engage that they can participate fully in the whole process of the activity and those having relative experience are preferred. Please students that are interested in the summer camp send your resume and photo to us by Email at studentsunion@hotmail.com by May 31th.
Students' Union

考前最后一分钟还看了个notice，但还是没有写日期。感觉很多写的不地道，能评多少分

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