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smile6jade · 发表于 2014-10-20 15:39

发到这里应该可以吧，谢谢老师，老师辛苦了！期待回复！

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smile6jade · 发表于 2014-10-20 15:40

smile6jade 发表于 2014-10-20 15:39
发到这里应该可以吧，谢谢老师，老师辛苦了！期待回复！

我的图片怎么没有了……

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逆袭女汉子 · 发表于 2014-10-20 15:41

怎么传不了作文啊

逆袭女汉子 · 发表于 2014-10-20 15:43

上传不了，只能发这里了，谢谢老师！英语一

碧落135 · 发表于 2014-10-20 15:53

之前的没拍清楚

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碧落135 · 发表于 2014-10-20 15:55

碧落135 发表于 2014-10-20 15:53
之前的没拍清楚

依旧不真，无语了

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Infinite168 · 发表于 2014-10-20 16:02

英语一！～谢谢方老师！～

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Infinite168 · 发表于 2014-10-20 16:04

未必免看不清～～～再来一张！～！～老师辛苦！～！～

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smile6jade · 发表于 2014-10-20 16:04

刚才传的图不清楚，直接手打了！
      As is shown in the first picture , a beautiful girl threw the banana peel on the ground when she passed by a rubbish bin . However , a boy is picking up the peel into the bin in the second picture. There is a sentence below the two pictures that beauty is not in the appearance.
   This two drawings illustrate what is the most beautiful thing is not what you showed outside but what you did. Although, a man or girl is good-looking with beautiful dress , what he or she performances can truly reflect what he thought . For example , some tourists go abroad for traveling with littering at random. Even though they are well-rich with expensive and beautiful clothes, they are not in the truly beauty.
      To be honest , we are surrounded by this kind of person in our lives . It is necessary to improve our awareness of the moral culture and I believe we can got the true beauty in the future.

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大头大头大头鬼 · 发表于 2014-10-20 16:05

刚刚发了作文，为什么显示"不良信息"啊,敲了好久啊。。全没了。。。

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