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2011新东方王江涛强化班写作讲义一.doc
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考研结束这么多天，一直想把自己备考时准备的作文贴出来。楼主考英语二80+，分数还可以，但是英语二考图表作文，当初准备的模版在考试时只挑了几句用，对备考英语一的同学来说倒是用处大一些。所以放到论坛上，供大家参考。
这几个模板上的句子大部分是看黄皮书时从真题上抄下来的，看见能用的就一点一点的添到了作文里。准备作文的时候大家也会发现，大多数模板上面的句子都大致相仿，没什么新意。楼主把这几个模板贴出来，只是给大家一个自己总结模板的例子，大家可以按照自己的写作习惯，根据真题中的句子总结出自己的模板。
楼主当时参考的是《迦思佑-作文定量分析与定性预测》（大概叫这个名字）和**王江涛讲的作文强化班。
《迦》这本书主要是思想很好，把作文分为四大类，即人生哲理类（也就是成功学，像勤奋、团队合作什么的，今年真题考的就是这一类）、社会现象类（也就是社会上新出现的各种现象，比如计算机网络、微博等等）、有型社会问题（这类社会问题主要是ZF采取措施就可以解决的问题）、无形社会问题（主要是ZF参与也无法合理解决的问题，比如赡养老人等等）。其实这几类问题之间也是有交集的，模板也可以灵活使用。每年英语一的真题都可以归在这几类中，因此按照这四类准备模板就可以以不变应万变了。但这本小册子上面总结的句子与段落却错误百出，而且有很多重复，显得很潦草。
王江涛老师的课讲得很好，是从网上下的，听听对写作还是有些帮助的。老师主要是把一篇文章分为三部分：提出问题（图片描述、现状阐释）；分析问题（意义阐述、原因举例）；解决问题（建议措施、归纳总结）。这样每篇文章的框架也就定型了。写作时也就不怕无从下手。
下面就分别几个方面把模板打出来供大家参考。我总结的也不是很好，有的地方想把所有我觉得好的句子都塞在里面所以会显得牵强些。
一、人生哲理
It is apparent that the ____ aims at reminding us of the significance of ____ in our daily life.As competition in all lines grows increasingly fierce, it is difficult to the point of impossibility to imagine one would succeed without the assistance of ____.
If you were to examine the life journey of the elite, you would most likely to find a noteworthy quirk. If you then examine those who have no interest in self-growth, you would find this phenomenon to be ever pronounced.
Basketball hero YaoMing is a case in point. He can achieve his goal because ____ contribute more or less to his outstanding performance. Likewise, the successful launching of Change NO1 Lunar probe should be attributed to the Chinese scientists’ ____ instead of ____ .A number of other great achievers, such as Marie Curie, found that success favors those who ____ forever.
On the basis of the analysis above, we may draw a conclusion that it would be easier for people with ____ to succeed than those without ____ . Hence, rather than dismissing ourselves as ____ , we can instead ____ in every attempts. In addition, it’s indispensible to train our kids frequently to ____ . As the proverb goes, the people achieving ultimate success could see silver linings through the darkest clouds.
二、社会现象
Of all the changes that have been taken place in China during the past quarter century, perhaps the most far-reaching has been ____ . ____ has been combining with ____ , merging into ____ , bringing color to the dull rountine of everyday life. For many of us, the ____ society is not on the horizon—it’s already here.
As a result, the modern world is increasingly populated by ____ whose presence we seldom notice but whose universal existence has facilitated many human lives. But to be fascinated is also , sometimes ,to be blind. The same dramatic ____ change that has provided people with more ____ has also increased the risk that some people will lose the ability to ____ .
Voices now from many quarters insisting that measures should be taken to sink a full impart of it. For one thing, we should use ____ as ____ to keep abreast of ____. More than anything, it should serve only as means to this end, and should be prevented from ____ . For another, a more tolerant environment for ____ should be given for ordinary people to try exotic lifestyles. This is where building a harmonious society comes in.
三、有形社会问题
This ____ does reflect a thought-provoking phenomenon which has become commonplace and aroused much chatter in China. You may criticize ____ for ____, but the roots go far deeper.
For one thing, over the past quarter of a country, China has firmly performed the policy of reform and opening-up which has not only brought about rapid economic growth, sustained social progress and continuous improvement of people’s living standard, but also giver rise to the collapse of the precious traditional virtual and degeneration of the cultural fabrics of a society. For another, we are suffering a shortage of legal instruments to penalize such illegalities and our punishment is too weak to be effective.
____ in any society is a mirror of that society in which we can see ____, The sharp deterioration of ____ poses urgent chanlleges to us to devote conscientious support and take drastic measures. On the one hand, China should learn from some western countries to iron out this problem by means of national legislations and relative regulations. On the other hand, our government should clearly establish the responsibilities and obligations of the departments concerned for implementing the policy. In the long run, a special education system is essential to promote and strengthen citizen’s awareness of ____ and hence improve their notions of ____ . Once the ____ has begun, the harmonious society may not be far behind.
Solving this problem calls for , above all , the government’s efforts to control ____ , to decrease ____ and to enhance the laws to forbid ____ . Moreover, common citizens should be aware of this____ crisis and take on the responsibility to ____ . In brief , only when the government and the common people make joint efforts can we hope to find a satisfactory solution to this problem.
四、无形社会问题
It remains to be seen whether ____ , because many powerful forces appear to work against it. For one thing , ____ is the inevitable side effects of rapid economic development, which, of necessity, had to occur in an unbalanced way. For another, those who ____ may think they have had a lucky escape, thus they live and die without knowing ____ . More than anything, ____ has been blaming themselves for the ____ in public. Behind the scenes, however, they have been taking aim at someone else:____.
The ____ of a society is not only as good as the weakest link, and a balanced economic development should not be accompanied by sacrifice of ____ . To serve as responsible stewards of our society, we must press forward to promote people’s awareness of ____ . But awareness alone is inadequate. From the long-term point of view, the authority should set up a special education system to teach children the Chinese traditional virtues as early as possible.
In summary, China still has a long way to go in this situation. Accordingly, great efforts are essential to make to maintain sustained economic development and build a harmonious society. We will encounter no fewer difficulties as we stride ahead, bur we are confident to overcome them and arrive at our set goal triumphantly.
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