nickchanu 发表于 2011-5-30 23:19 ![]()
Though some one aboard reckons that the Final Vote of Tsinghua's College Discrimination tends to be ...
Though some one aboard reckons that the Final Vote of Tsinghua's College Discrimination tends to be tedious and self-deceiving, I still wanna reannounce that the Vote isn't for the sake of my own merits but certainly intends to benefit all the people here having a Tsinghua Dream.Many people like me used to be bothered, disturbed, tortured by the innervisioned question,which thereby may have a strong negative impact on their passion to pursue the Dream and keep his or her own end,especially at a critical moment,say when approaching the Entrance Examination. This is not for my selfish purpose, as I repoint, I have been enrolled to one of the Top 3 universities in this country whose the major of mine could be at least a balance to the one in Tsinghua. I'll restate that all people vote here should be nice enough to show objectiveness, thus the Vote demonstrating its significance statistically.THANKS EVERYONE HERE AND WISH YOU COULD LEAVE YOUR COLLEGE BACKGROUND AND THE MAJOR YOU HAVE BEEN ENROLLED IN OF TSINGHUA, HENFORTH WE CAN HAVE A MORE ACCURATE INFORMATION ON INDEED WHICH DEPARTMENTS OF TSINGHUA ARE DOING THE DISCRIMINATION. IF ANYBODY HAS A GOOD ADVICE ON IMPROVING THE VOTE DESIGN, I'LL TAKE IT AS AN HONOR ON A NEGOTIATION BASIS. 1，I have been enrolled to one of the Top 3 universities in this country whose the major of mine could be at least a balance to the one in Tsinghua.关系分句或者叫定语从句的关系词用错了，这里用关系限定词whose貌似有文法的瑕疵（“在”这所学校我所在的专业实力堪与清华媲美，用关系副词貌似比较妥当） 2，I'll restate that all people vote here should be nice enough to show objectiveness,vote在这里应该用非限定动词（或称为非谓语动词）的形式voting，作后置定语，在上文的having a Tsinghua Dream做的不错，可惜未有保持 3，THANKS EVERYONE HERE AND WISH YOU COULD LEAVE YOUR COLLEGE BACKGROUND AND THE MAJOR YOU HAVE BEEN ENROLLED IN OF TSINGHUA, 作为祈使句，动词thank在这里不加s 4，HENFORTH WE CAN HAVE A MORE ACCURATE INFORMATION Information是不可数名词 5，IF ANYBODY HAS A GOOD ADVICE advice同样是不可数名词 | 
发表于 2011-12-28 19:18
楼主: nickchanu
