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以下是我总结的大作文的“写作框架”和一些常用句型，供大家参考。小作文内容太杂，具体的大家去看作文书 大作文总结 红色下划线标出的内容可通用。 第一段：客观地描述图画。 一句总述，两句细节（或一句细节，一句文字说明），共三句。 As is vividly depicted in the cartoon (It is subtly/symbolically illustrated in the cartoon that...), four children are planning a football match of taking care of their aged father. Each of them stands in a different corner of a football field. The eldest son kicked out the father, with the other three children guarding their goals. (cartoon “图画”的同义词: drawing/picture/photo)
注意同义替换！ 第一段可从一下几个方面去写：事物+动作+环境
或 人物+衣着+表情。 文字说明： 若两幅图并列：In the first cartoon, the caption indicates that.... In the second photo, we are informed that... (当只有一幅图时，两句取其一) 当两幅图相互对比时，第一段的写法： The drawings vividly illustrated the changes of numbers of fishes and fish-boats in the past 100 years (总述). In one picture, there were various kinds of fishers and only one fishing boat in 1900 (细节1). On the contrary, in 1995 there was only one fish, but a great many fishing boats. (细节2，与前一句对比) 第二段：意义阐释，寓意（1句）+分析（4句），共五句。 寓意（1句），引出现象（问题）： 表述1：Undoubtedly, we can deduce from the portrayal that the cartoonist/photographer is trying to attract our attention to the issue of... 表述2：Undoubtedly, we can deduce from the portrayal that the cartoonist/photographer is trying to attract our attention to the phenomenon that..., which is not uncommon (not uncommon = prevailing) in contemporary society.（非限制定语从句） 表述3：Undoubtedly, we can deduce from the portrayal that the cartoonist/photographer is trying to attract our attention to the fact that one of the burning questions facing our society today is that... 分析（4句）,可以从原因分析、现状列举、例证、分析事物利弊的方面去考虑。 file:///C:/Users/ADMINI~1/AppData/Local/Temp/msohtmlclip1/01/clip_image001.gif
原因分析（原因基础句型，适用于任何需要讲述原因的情形）：There might be three main reasons, I suppose, accounting for this phenomenon. In the first place,…… Furthermore,…… Moreover, the most essential/important factor is that ……， which is usually neglected. file:///C:/Users/ADMINI~1/AppData/Local/Temp/msohtmlclip1/01/clip_image001.gif
现状列举：First and foremost, …… Furthermore, …… Last but not the
least,…… file:///C:/Users/ADMINI~1/AppData/Local/Temp/msohtmlclip1/01/clip_image001.gif
例证：As an example of
…… is that
……；A case in point is
……； Numerous examples can demonstrate the power of a positive outlook. For instance, …… We can give out lots of examples, but I think the story of …… is most familiar to us. file:///C:/Users/ADMINI~1/AppData/Local/Temp/msohtmlclip1/01/clip_image001.gif
分析事物利弊：There is no doubt that
…… is the driving force behind the swift progress of industry, agriculture, science and technology. Nobody can deny that the development of our civilization depends on ……. On one hand, the most important advantage of …… is that ……. On the other hand, ……. More essentially, there can be no substitute for …… in efficiency enhancement. Conversely, just as the common saying goes, “A coin has two sides”, despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by ……, the changes they bring could very well lead to potential adverse consequences. To begin with, ……. To make matters worse, ……. Worst of all, …… . 第三段：评论，个人观点，建议措施（1句总述，2句建议，1句包装）。 1句总述+提建议： 表述1：All things considered, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to reverse the disturbing trend illustrated/revealed in the picture. 表述2：All things considered, it is high time for us to work out concrete solutions to the problem/ (to improve the situation) The traditional method is to
……. In addition,……. Only in this way can …… and only in this way can ……. 发表个人观点： From my standpoint,…… is a double-edged sword. We should …… and …… at the same time. Only in this way …… 再补充几个句子： Ø
提建议（个人方面）： We each individual should start from right here and now, and attach great value and importance to the urgency of the issue. Ø
讲环境保护，结束语： It is only when the environment has been protected that the society we are living in can become more harmonious.（强调句型，在2011考研英语大作文中本人就采用了这句） Ø
提建议（用于凑字数）： Since neither of the suggestions can effectively solve the problem independently, there is a increase awareness that the two solutions may be combined with other possible measures to produce the best effect.
To begin with, relevant laws and regulations should be made to severely punish those who ……. In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of the young that ……
Ø
（此句尽量用） It has not been proved difficult to make strong case for the view that affluent nations, as well as affluent individuals, ought to be doing much more to help the poor than they are generally now doing.（强烈支持……观点不会有什么困难） | 
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