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新东方4 6级考试作文辅导课程 讲义 第二课第一节
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1.词性 success n succeed v
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2.单复数：电脑很有用 Computers are very useful
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3.冠词
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4.时态：作文基本上以现在时为主。
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5.代词一致
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If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone. To a company, no consumer will buy your product again.
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Nowadays, there are many dishonest performance in our society. ...... Another case in the point, a pair of shoes was made from goat. However, in order to sale at a high price, the salers would say they were made from cow which has good quality.
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②Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams.
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Dishonest people are short-sighted.
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注：virtue 美德；customer 顾客
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①In our modern social life, there are many examples around us show many people are cheated. Advertisements cheat people, salesmen cheat people, even one's closest friends cheat him or her. So many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot help asking: where is our honest exist?
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高分作文：
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用词准确、句式多样，
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推荐句式有，被动句 ： It is widely believed that...
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呻吟句：I you we；compare come to the conclusion
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A comparison of the two graphs leads us to the conclusion that
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非人称主语句、复合句、并列句
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复合句中共有六种从句：主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句、定语从句、状语从句、同位语从句： ,+which 非限制性定语从句
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1) Motor vehicles discharge large amounts of exhaust fumes. They seriously pollute the air in the city.
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Motor vehicles 机动车；discharge 排放；exhaust fumes 尾气
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注：computers are very cheap. Almost every family can buy one.；so that
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computers are so cheap that almost every family can buy one.
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第二节
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作文中注意：
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1、不要用口语词 （You konw. wanna. gonna. hay ……）
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2、不要用生僻词
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搭配共分为四种：
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第一种：形容词+名词（大幅度的增长 — a sharp increase ）
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第二种：动词+名词 （犯罪 — commit a crime ）
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（达到目的 —achieve a goal）
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第三种：动词+副词（大幅度地增长 — increase sharply）
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（大幅度地增长 — increase dramaticly）
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第四种：动词+介词（或+小副词 up down out off）
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( break out/down/into/through)
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We often can meet with soming happened cause by people who are not honest. For example, Now we take the bus need carry cents own, and when you upstairs the bus, you should put the cent into the money box.
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注：soming 改成 something；happened cause 改成 caused；cent 改成 changes / coins
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when we take the bus, we need carry coins own,
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When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some
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other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.
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注：人们的 观点 不一致：
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people's opinion differ.
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When it comes to reading, people's opinion differ.
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第三节
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全真试题—Unit 1
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Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as
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注：由于是限制型定语从句，两个逗号应该去掉。
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认为：think,believe,argue,claim,hold
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But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of
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books can only give us one aspect of knowledge.
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To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible.
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By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.
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注：To my point 改成 in my opinion 或者 in my view；By 改成 In
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Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published.
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第四节
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Directions:
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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition based on the title: Should Firecrackers Be Banned? You should base your composition on the following outline (given in Chinese).
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Should Firecrackers Be Banned?
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1. 有人认为放鞭炮是好事，为什么？
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2. 有人认为放鞭炮是坏事，为什么？
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3. 我的看法
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1. Some people think that setting off firecrackers is a good thing.
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Some people think that setting off firecrackers is beneficial. First it can add to atmosphere on festivals. Second it is a Chinese tradition.
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Some people think that setting off firecrackers is a good thing. They say that it is an ancient Chinese custom which should be preserved. They also claim that firecrackers make festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children.
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注：When it comes to setting off firecrackers,people's opinion differ.
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简单句的扩展：拉长主谓宾，加上定状补。
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First,pets can reduce our loneliness.
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In the first place,pets such as dogs,cats,birds can reduce loneliness for both adults and children.
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2. 造成：cause、lead to、result in sth. 、bring about、be
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First,setting off firecrackers leads to fires.Secondly it result in injuress to people.Finally it also brings about noise.
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