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2008-5-28 15:29 水水果
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[color=Red][b]英语老师给了作文题,要作为期末考,俺英语特差劲四级就没过的,希望大家帮帮忙,先谢谢了。
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题目是:奥运火炬传递报道的感想 写200字左右
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6月20号考试,俺还要时间提前背掉,希望愿意帮忙地这几天能给弄出来呀,感激不尽[/b][/color][em:15]

2008-5-28 15:29 乘着风的翅膀
您所查看的帖子来源于考研论坛(bbs.kaoyan.com) [font=Times New Roman][size=4]The 2008 Summer Olympic Games will be held in Beijing soon. The Olympic Torch Relay has been the most topical subject for these days. As a Chinese, I am very proud because it is the grand ceremony for us Chinese people. The Olympic Torch Relay once again spread the Olympic spirit all over the world and demonstrated Chinese people's passion for the Olympic Movement. The relay showcased the people, beautiful sceneries, cultural heritage in countries, regions and cities along the relay route. It also enhanced mutual understanding and friendship among people of different countries. Moreover, it further expounded the rich implication of our theme slogan "One World One Dream".:NOMWd
Along the overseas relay route, the Torch Relay was warmly welcomed by many people of foreign countries,though Dalai group tried to destroy it.In Paris,Jin Jing,a disabled Chinese torch bearer, sitting in a wheel chair, held the torch tightly and managed to protect it from the robbing of the separatist of Tibet. She was so great and brave. I totally believed that most people were deeply moved,seeing it.At that time,I could not help bursting into tears. And also I will never forget that those brave Chinese students studying abroad and overseas Chinese made their great efforts to protect the Torch Relay.I am greatly proud of China. What’s more,I have had an intimate understanding of the word patriotism
3m;I_ u3o| ` Now the Olympic Torch Relay continues in China.  Attendants of the launching ceremony and torch bearers will firstly observe one minute of silence to mourn the victims in the massive earthquake in Sichuan province, showing great respect for them. During the process of the Torch Relay,we often hear the slogans such as "Come on, Sichuan province"and"Come on, China".W|c7^ w*A4]
Great China,great Chinese people! The Beijing Olympic Games that help promote a better and more peaceful world will be a great success!We Chinese people will move steadily toward prosperity and happiness,and make China a prosperous, strong, democratic, culturally developed and harmonious modern socialist country![/size][/font]
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2008-5-28 15:45 胡郁欣
[qq:20] 作弊啊

2008-5-28 15:57 0melody0
偶贡献150威望给热心的筒子[em:18]

2008-5-28 16:20 胡郁欣
您所查看的帖子来源于考研论坛(bbs.kaoyan.com) [font=Times New Roman][size=5][color=black]Olympic torch relay has been the hottest topic for these days. As a Chinese, I have been experiencing the complex feeling of being upset, worried, irritated and proud... :X*g-P7SKa
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  Above all, we should be strong and confident to face with all these challenges! During the process of torch relay, even the rioters are taking all possible and violent actions to rob the torch, but overseas Chinese people did make their great effort to protect the torch bearer team and demonstrate our points! One China, one family! No one or any organization can separate our country apart! They don’t have any rights to dictate our domestic policies! Proud of all Olympic supporters!
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2n0yO+}t ]/J   What’s the most irritating is the western medium never reported any of our demonstration as if we were not existing there! And still continuing with the untrue and biased work! This just unveiled their real hypocrite face! Aren’t they just the speakers of the politics?! What an alleged democratic and free country! There’s no definite democracy in this world. The only realistic democracy is to listen to the wish of majority people. Like now, we proud Chinese people only wish the peaceful and successful Olympics. It is supposed to be a bridge of international friendship instead of the playground of politics! Most separatists even don’t know our history and the real situation, what they are doing is just as a tool or clowns used by the certain Power! Shame on them, shame on Dalai group. Dalai Lama definitely doesn’t deserve the spiritual leader of Tibet! 3y-td.G4tvkin*G&v
China as a multi-national country has 56 ethnic groups. We are brothers and sisters to form this proud nation! We would never lose any brother or sister. So the separatists, this is just like our old proverb: Never let the others tolerate what you couldn’t accept! Because we would never say "Free Corsica","Free Scotland","Free Americans",etc...
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  Time will tell! Let the peace and harmony back to this world...that’s our sincere wish...One world, One dream....[/color][/size][/font]

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2008-5-28 16:32 胡郁欣
网上下的[em:18]

2008-5-28 16:39 乘着风的翅膀
回复 #5 胡郁欣 的帖子

[qq:20] 网络的强大
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没看接力没什么感想啊,我写不出来[em:18]

2008-5-28 17:01 乘着风的翅膀
4楼文章还可以,但是有些错误有些句子需要修改!我看明天有空不,有空的话帮楼主改改[em:18]

2008-5-28 17:12 胡郁欣
回复 #7 乘着风的翅膀 的帖子

谢谢 偶今天也没空 要下班了 晚上还有晚会[em:18]

2008-5-28 19:44 临水之韵
[qq:13] 谢谢,谢谢
%R MC3Is 期待,期待~:P

2008-5-28 21:17 yhj2008
我虽然英语不咋的!y4U*K["F)}
但写作是我的强项[qq:13]

2008-5-28 21:24 sht4023
I v no feeling for this topic, but if you v a chinese article already, i can translate it for you

2008-5-28 21:35 我de2009
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n]&{L'w| 写作是偶的强项,偶说的是汉语:o

2008-5-28 21:59 sdtcms
奥运火炬传递报道的感想Lb ?egR
选择求助网络

2008-5-29 01:11 vov1231
stronger   [qq:13]

2008-5-29 01:50 zf115
[em:18] 你是某个斑竹的夫人

2008-5-29 18:23 水水果
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2008-5-30 13:26 南極熊
偶认识楼主JJ

2008-5-30 13:29 乘着风的翅膀
回复 #18 南極熊 的帖子

[em:18] 她是谁的马甲啊,不认识:o

2008-5-30 13:31 水水果
:loveliness: 谢谢,谢谢大家[qq:13] :P

2008-5-30 14:41 胡郁欣
回复 #19 乘着风的翅膀 的帖子

带水的[qq:20]

2008-5-30 14:46 水水果
您所查看的帖子来源于考研论坛(bbs.kaoyan.com) [quote]原帖由 [i]南極熊[/i] 于 2008-5-30 13:26 发表 [url=http://bbs.kaoyan.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=21683458&ptid=2261122][img]http://bbs.kaoyan.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
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%Q sqFTG_7u 鹰儿~!石头?

2008-5-30 14:50 乘着风的翅膀
回复 #22 水水果 的帖子

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看来又一个马甲

2008-5-30 22:35 shishengqiang
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2008-6-1 10:01 水水果
(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……~

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